Connie Marcum Wong Poet Triolet

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Stardust

Stardust

The wonders of the stars tonight
Have sprinkled stardust in your hair.
In indigo of new moon light
The wonders of the stars tonight
Instill with beauty my delight
To let you know I am aware,
The wonders of the stars tonight
Have sprinkled stardust in your hair.

8-21-22

Triolet - Old or New Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May 


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1-26-22

Triolet Poetry Contest 160 Words or Less Poetry Contest~Second Place~
Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger
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Len Gasun August 26, 2022 at 2:28 AM A dazzling beauty in this stardust triolet my dear friend Connie. Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith August 25, 2022 at 10:38 AM Back with Congratulations on your New win. A beautiful/wonderful write. Have a great/fun/blessed day writing away........

Valsa George August 25, 2022 at 8:58 AM Congratulations Connie on your first place win !

Linda Alice Fowler August 25, 2022 at 6:26 AM Congratulations on your win Connie! Linda

Paul Callus August 24, 2022 at 2:45 PM The stardust of a starry night hardly ever fails to captivate, Connie. Your Triolet is such a pleasure to read. ~ Congratulations on your podium finish. Warm regards, my friend // paul

Constance La France August 24, 2022 at 1:57 PM Connie, beautiful Triolet and congratulations on your win in the ~

Joseph May August 24, 2022 at 1:52 PM An enchanting starry night, Lovely write Connie, Congrats on your win

Eric Cohen March 17, 2022 at 2:28 PM Beautiful entry in this difficult form, Connie. Love the link as well to a favorite standard song.

Sam Kauffman March 8, 2022 at 9:00 AM What a wonderful image of twinkling stardust dusting your beloved's hair Connie! Such a beautiful and delightful image! Congratulations on your win! Sending you twinkling blessings and hugs! Aloha!

Paula Goldsmith March 8, 2022 at 8:19 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Stardust" is a beautiful/wonderful write. Love it. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Christuraj Alex March 8, 2022 at 3:45 AM Great stargazing. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Faye Gibson February 26, 2022 at 7:49 AM Triolet is one of my favorite forms; there is something about the forms that have repeating lines that I just love. This is lovely, Connie. Connie Marcum Wong February 26, 2022 at 8:24 AM Thank you very much Faye. This is only the second Triolet I have ever written. Thank you very much. Blessings xxoo

Valsa George February 24, 2022 at 4:00 AM Triolet is quite new to me ! You have done a beautiful work Connie ! Connie Marcum Wong February 26, 2022 at 8:18 AM I am not good at forms using repeating lines and write very few of them, but the triolet is less challenging than some of the others. Thank you Valsa. Blessings xxoo

Paul Callus February 6, 2022 at 4:37 AM This is absolutely beautiful, Connie. It also flows very smoothly (I find 8-syllable lines to suit this form perfectly). ~ Warm regards // paul Connie Marcum Wong February 6, 2022 at 11:45 AM Thank you very much Paul. This is only my second Triolet I have ever written. Repeating lines are a challenge for me. I am happy you liked it. Have a great week. Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich February 4, 2022 at 7:21 PM I can't believe you have only done two triolets in your life. Even back in the day when Marie had us doing them for that one book??? Connie Marcum Wong February 4, 2022 at 11:52 PM Nope….I thought they were too much of a challenge. Remember, you had a triolet contest and persuaded me to write one for it. That was my first ever triolet. It is called “Emerald” Celebrate May with a Triolet (tree-o-lay) Poetry Contest by Andrea Dietrich. Does that ring a bell? You gave me third place in the premiere contest. I told you I am not that great at repeating lines so the triolet does not appeal to me. Thanks for reading it. Blessings xxoo

Phyllis Babcock February 2, 2022 at 8:45 AM Very pretty triolet Connie. This is a form I have never tried and looks like a winner to me. love phyl Connie Marcum Wong February 2, 2022 at 10:48 AM Thank you Phyl. It is a challenging form and is my second time to write one. Thank you my friend. Blessings xxoo

Joanna Daniel February 2, 2022 at 6:09 AM Beautiful triolet, Connie:) I see a winner here, stardust is sure to attract anyone:) Connie Marcum Wong February 2, 2022 at 10:47 AM Thank you Joe. The stars are so romantic from dusk to dawn. Blessings xxoo

Sotto Poet February 1, 2022 at 2:18 PM Connie, It's beautiful how your poem comes from within your soul. This is lovely, subtle, and lyrical. I liked the notion of allowing the reader to sail away with everything going well. Appreciate your generous visit to my page. Kindest regards Connie Marcum Wong February 1, 2022 at 5:25 PM Thank you very much Lasaad. Have a wonderful new year. Today is the Chinese New Year of the Tiger. Blessings xxoo

Bill Baker January 30, 2022 at 10:58 PM A nice Triolet, Connie. very pleasant to read. Bill Connie Marcum Wong February 1, 2022 at 2:14 PM Thank you Bill. The stars are glorious on a New moon night here. Blessings xxoo

Kim Rodrigues January 30, 2022 at 6:15 PM Very pretty, Connie! Connie Marcum Wong February 1, 2022 at 2:15 PM Thank you very much Kim. This is only the second Triolet I have ever written. They are a challenge for me. Blessings xxoo

M. L. Kiser January 30, 2022 at 5:11 PM Very nice Triolet. Connie Marcum Wong February 1, 2022 at 2:16 PM Thank you M.L. They are a real challenge for me. This is the second one I have written. Blessings xxoo

Brenda Chiri January 30, 2022 at 4:41 AM What a great read my friend truly enjoyed!:) Connie Marcum Wong February 1, 2022 at 2:16 PM Thank you Brenda. The stars keep inspiring poetry from me. Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich January 29, 2022 at 9:36 PM connie, wow, this may be one of the best triolets I have ever seen from you. LOVE it. A fave Connie Marcum Wong February 1, 2022 at 2:19 PM Wow Andrea! Thank you very much. It is only the second one I have ever written. My other one was written for your contest quite a ways back. They seem easy for you, but they sure are a challenge for me. I really appreciate the encouraging Fave. Blessings xxoo

Lisa Ricci January 29, 2022 at 9:29 AM Hello Connie - This is lovely and gentle and very much poetry. I enjoyed your theme which allows the reader to float away with everything that is good. Best of luck with the contest. Blessings and peace always Connie. Connie Marcum Wong February 1, 2022 at 2:23 PM It is lovely to hear from you Lisa. Thank you for your sweet comment on my little triolet. I wanted to express love with the love of nature. Blessings xxoo

Jennifer Proxenos January 28, 2022 at 8:58 AM Your heart directed your hand and pen with this beautiful poem my friend - it is a wonderful write Connie, your poems are born from within your heart always, and your comments also so heartfelt and thoughtful. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Connie Marcum Wong February 1, 2022 at 2:24 PM Thank you for leaving such a lovely comment Jennifer. I feel the same way about your poetry. You inspire always. Blessings xxoo

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