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Star Gazing

As I TRAVERSE from one place to another. I sat down to get some rest underneath the pale moonlight. Next, I looked up to gaze at the stars. And ASTRAL thoughts bombarded my mind. I pondered if there was an unknown ENTERPRISE beyond the sky. All of a sudden, I heard a subtle noise. PERNICIOUS worries of being harmed vexed my mind. I wondered if I was in danger. Fear gripped my soul. So I reached in my bag to find my flashlight. With trembling hands, I shined the light in the direction of an old willow tree. Beads of sweat ran down my nervous VISAGE. As I moved closer, I noticed a squirrel scurrying away.Then I focused on a dark red BLEMISH on the tree trunk. Fear consumed my soul. It aimed to DAMPEN any ounce of courage that I possessed. I felt as though I needed a SENTRY of soldiers to protect me. But in the meantime, I ran to my Jeep. And high tailed it out of there much quicker than I came. 1 Sentry, 2 Pernicious,3 Enterprise, 4 Dampen, 5 Blemish, 6 Traverse, 7 Astral, 8 Visage Contest: Eight Word Challenge 11 Sponsor: John Hamilton Judged 11/13/2020 Alexis Y. 11/10/2020

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Date: 11/14/2020 12:44:00 PM
Very nice Lexi, my my you're a storyteller too! Great use of the 8 words, worked very well, I see you made some edits, it seems to flow better from thought to thought, much more poetic. Free verse is very challenging, it's not prose it's more poetic. I like the changes you made!
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Date: 11/11/2020 6:13:00 PM
WOW Sis! this is wonderful write mine for me, lol GREAT JOB!
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Date: 11/11/2020 4:12:00 AM
Much enjoyed the star gazing trip with you, Alexis and the spooky images night invokes. All the best my friend.
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Date: 11/11/2020 3:47:00 AM
very well done. excellent and exciting. Hope you win. take care. Pete.
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Date: 11/11/2020 2:45:00 AM
What a great way to use those 8 words and produce such a great poem..
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Date: 11/11/2020 2:39:00 AM
Very well done. Best for a win. ~~
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Date: 11/11/2020 1:49:00 AM
Great use of the allocated words Alexis, good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 11/11/2020 12:42:00 AM
Alexis, you wove the eight words so seamlessly into your story. Good thing your Jeep engine started. Loved the descriptions of the star-gazing. Enjoy your day, my friend ~ John
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