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September.2.2023
Star-Crossed Lovers Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Robert James Ligouri
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Star-Crossed Lovers

After many cold winters, they met again, Under the poplar tree on a starry moonlit night. Though they had planned it over many a time, It came to fruition after such long lapse of years. Once they loved as no lovers could ever In devotion, never had they faltered, never once failed, But fate was sadly against this star-crossed pair, And the young lovers had to part ways in pain. Once again, the old classmates congregated, Precisely at the same campus under the same tree Though years have wrinkled its aged bark, Still, it bears the indelible mark of a heart pierced by an arrow To its cover they have been drawn once more Not to renew their bond or weave fresh dreams, But just to see and feel once and never more, For a fleeting second to be in love’s prison bound. An eloquent silence lingered deep. The celestial bodies stood in breathless anticipation. From the sepulchered past, dead worlds awoke. They knew, separation had only accentuated their love. Alas! Nothing could their severed lives entwine Neither a kiss nor an embrace, the shattered years combine Yet once more they put their arms around. And for the last time they looked at each other. Perhaps, they meant this as their last gesture of love, Hoping its memory would fuel them when weary, With eyes blurred and moistened with tears, And billows of emotion rising sky high. Fearing they would lose their composure, Abruptly they turned their wan faces away. Without another word of goodbye, They walked away into the stillness of the night!
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Date: 9/4/2023 6:04:00 PM
Breathtakingly beautiful. Well done Valsa for your win in the contest. Love SV
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Date: 9/2/2023 8:37:00 PM
Sigh, this pierced through my soul and pulled my sombre heartstrings.. What an aching write about star-crossed lovers.. Somehow, it's relatable and the emotions came alive as I read through the lines, till the end.. The descriptions, imageries carved in lines and the wordplay.. Everything sounds so mellifluous and rhythmic yet their depth is soul stirring! Beautifully woven piece with artistic hues and creativity of your gorgeous writing style.. Love this so much! - Hiya
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Date: 9/2/2023 4:40:00 PM
Very engaging poetry, Valsa, a good entry for the contest. You conveyed the feeling and build suspense verse to verse. You closed the poem well, allowing the reader to feel the emotions the two were feeling and think back to their own (what if relationships). Thanks for sharing, my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 9/2/2023 1:37:00 PM
A lovely write/story. Have a great day/weekend writing away.................
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Date: 9/2/2023 11:54:00 AM
Valsa, your writing is absolutely captivating. This poem is a true delight to read and savor. The vivid imagery you paint with your words surpasses mere beauty, transporting the reader to another world. This is a magnificent narrative, your writing skills are truly exceptional, effortlessly captivating, and holding the reader's attention. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 9/2/2023 10:43:00 AM
Nice poem. Emotional and heartfelt. GL in contest.
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