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Sorrow had passed his way many times, said the lines across his brow. His truth was challenged again and again, but to lies he refused to bow. Even in the face of death, his ground he firmly stood. He'd taken an oath long years ago, to always do as he knew he should. His craving for Truth was beyond his control, he must stand for Truth and right. After bloodedly beaten by the cat of nine tails, there he stood a horrid sight. The cowards were befuddled, twas six against one, they demanded at once he must lie. “Why take all the pain, it's insane,” they taunted; “you’ll surely die.” Should he admit to a deed he'd not done? Should he lie to save his life? He knew if he did, the lie had won, making meaningless all his strife. “Untie my hands, give me a sword, one against six; I'll fight. Truth will prevail and have her way, I’ll gladly accept my plight. The ropes were cut, his hands set free. A sword was thrown to the ground, and finally found with swollen eyes that could barely see. He quickly called out to the power within, “Please overcome my will”! For a man of love, twas a torturous path, for six men he'd have to kill. Then with power he'd never known, with skills that all seemed new. The six were slain and Truth had won, Truth and right had gotten their due. He lifted his arms and offered his thanks, to the power that carried him through. Being faithful to the oath, to be true to himself, Was the right thing for him to do.

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Date: 11/14/2023 3:26:00 AM
Oh My Goodness Bill. Good Morning. Please allow me to say you have written with dignity and grace in its entirety starting with the title to which you did not stray. Truly. Your execution and message are both well thought out. Your ending allows the reader to pause and reflect. This entry strikes a chord. Thank you for sharing your skilled poetic talent. Have a wonderful morning and day. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
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Date: 11/14/2023 9:12:00 AM
Thank you for you thoughtful and kind comments, Lisa. This is one of my favorite poems. It means a lot to me that it resonated with you, my dear friend. Peace and love to you and those you love. Bill
Date: 10/30/2023 6:13:00 AM
Truth enjoys "the thrill of victory", but lies go down in the 'agony of defeat"
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Date: 10/30/2023 5:01:00 PM
I love it! "lies go down in the 'agony of defeat". I agree, my friend. Bill
Date: 10/30/2023 5:43:00 AM
Dear Bill, You write fantastic poetry, which I admire. Your capacity to show courage under hardship is remarkable. You nicely told the narrative behind the photo and showed us your perspective. Your ability to create natural rhymes adds elegance to your work. Your writing is amazing, and I'm glad I read it.
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Date: 10/30/2023 5:03:00 PM
Thanks, Lasaad, you've always been a great friend and I appreciate all the kind things you say about my poetry. I'm still learning to write in different forms, but some of my poetry just come naturally to me. Have a pleasant week! Bill
Date: 10/28/2023 7:37:00 PM
This is a great poem about bravery when the odds are agsinst a person.. Thank you.
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Date: 10/29/2023 9:54:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and comment, Hilda. We need to be strong when things or people begin to overwhelm us. We also need to know what is most important to us and stand up for what we believe is right. Smiles ~ Blessings my friend, Bill
Date: 10/28/2023 7:10:00 PM
Gee, this is an immediate FAVE, Bill. So relevant for our times -- and all times. I love the narrative, the message, the delivery -- everything about this one! BRAVO! ~ Gershon
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Date: 10/29/2023 9:58:00 AM
Glad you liked it, gw. One of my favorite poems. Thanks for the FAV, my friend. bb
Date: 10/28/2023 11:27:00 AM
Great poem and storytelling through rhymes and flows... you described the story behind the photo and how you perceived it.. a lonely warrior who had to battle six and overcome the difficulties and still won... great poem.
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Date: 10/28/2023 3:43:00 PM
Thank you for your insightful comments, my friend, your comments are always an encouragement. I'll be visiting your poetry soon. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Date: 10/28/2023 2:56:00 AM
“ Truth and right had gotten their due” what a profound and deep line that is! A very metaphorical and very thought provoking poem this is! And i always admire and appreciate your rhymes they flow so very eloquently! The ending shows strength of a person that goes through so many challenges to remain true to their beliefs and what they stand for, despite all the obstacles! Something very rare to find these days, but you’ve reminded us all also to fight for our truth and what we deserve!amazing
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Date: 10/28/2023 11:18:00 AM
Thank you for the mindful comment, my dear friend. It is true, we should stand up for the things we hold dear, the things we believe in. We are imperfect in this world, but even though we will make mistakes, we should still strive to be true to ourselves. Things in this world come into form and go out of form. Our challenge is to do the best we can each day to learn and grow through the gift of each new day. Your presence has made a difference in our lives. Thank you for sharing your thought with us through your poetry and comments on ours. Bill & Sara
Date: 10/27/2023 3:30:00 PM
Dear Bill - I’m so impressed with this impeccable poem my lovely friend. The flow and rhyme is absolutely wonderful. I think this is one of your best I’ve had the pleasure of reading so far! I love the title and the whole essence, message, conveyed throughout the poem. Truth and being true to oneself especially will always prevail, conquer and win. Loved it! A fav for me . Hugs to you both for a blessed weekend. Xx :):)
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Date: 10/27/2023 3:50:00 PM
Thank you, Christina, for the lovely comment. This was my first poet here at Poetry Soup on the same date, 2 years ago. I knew no one and it got 1 comment, so I decided it was worth posting again so some others could read and comment on it. I cry every time I read it out loud to others. I can get very passionate and emotional when I sense injustice going on, as in this tale. Thank you so much for the FAV. It's first! Hugs my sweet friend. Bill
Date: 10/27/2023 3:44:00 AM
a powerful, metaphorical poem dear hubby! I felt the emotions of the 'unknown power' of the man as he fought for Truth. The rhyme scheme was well done and not distracting. As I read your poem, I couldn't help from singing the song "The Impossible Dream" Your poem is equally inspirational. hugs me
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Date: 10/27/2023 3:52:00 PM
You know how emotional I get when I read it aloud. Thanks for the comments on it, Sara. You're the best! Bill
Date: 10/27/2023 2:07:00 AM
I consider this a metaphoric poem. Truth must always win. It is the way to eternal bliss. Blessings.
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Date: 10/27/2023 3:55:00 PM
I agree, Victor, Truth always wins ... it is the way us humans perceive the events that makes some people think it loses Sometimes. Thanks for the visit and comments, my friend.

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