Spurned Love

She awoke to a blazing sun, brightest orb, day’s lover. The moon, jealous of her love, cried for the night’s loss. She, sleeping, missed the soft caress, silken touch, palest rays that beckoned her to waken and taste their sweetness.
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Kendrick Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 8:43 AM
I enjoyed reading this one today. I am glad you shared it with us. Thank you for dropping by with congratulations on my work. I appreciate you reading and commenting on my work. Sara K
Fowler Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 3:06 PM
I am so pleased by your visit Sara. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work. I am warmed by your visits. I hope your new year promises all good things for you. :)
Marc Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 11:08 AM
This is wonderful ~
Fowler Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 2:46 PM
Many thanks for your visit and kind remark. :)
Hoffman Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 2:48 PM
What a lovely shadorma, Linda. An enchanting and beautifully written piece. Congrats on your POTD!
Fowler Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Thank you Franci! I appreciate your comments. :)
Mccann Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 3:35 PM
I just found this, Linda. Such an elfin quality, magical and in perfect form!! Elizabeth
Fowler Avatar
August 23, 2022 at 5:16 AM
Hello Elizabeth. I am grateful for your visit and supportive words. Thank you! Linda
Wolf Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 8:02 PM
Somehow, this gem slipped past me. Congrats on POTD, Linda. Blessings, gw
Fowler Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 6:03 AM
Thank you Gershon. I am blessed in many ways. Thanks for the congrats! Linda
Fenn Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 9:58 PM
Good for you Linda!
Fowler Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 7:18 AM
Hi Jennifer. Nice to see you. Thanks for stopping by with congrats! Linda
Nicole Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 9:08 PM
"She awoke to a blazing sun, the moon, jealous of her love". This is beautiful, tender, romantic and emotional, all at the same time. You paint such vivid images with your words. Congratulations Linda, on Poem of the Day. I like your Avatar, by the way. :) Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy
Fowler Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 7:17 AM
Oh so kind of you to stop by with such supportive words Brandy. I'm honored by this award and by your comments. Thank you! Linda (and thanks for liking my avatar ;). hugs and blessings, Linda
Tor Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 4:30 PM
Congratulations Linda for this well thought Poetry on Spurned Love. "The moon, jealous of her love, cried for night's loss." Unique words to include in this Lovely Poetry. Big Congratulations for receiving POTD! God bless you and keep writing...
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 5:15 PM
You are kind Michael. Thanks so much! Linda
Logan Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 4:16 PM
I'm pleased to ready your lines as Poem of the Day, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 5:14 PM
Many thanks Jenna. :) Linda
Kauffman Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 10:57 AM
What a lovely poem of sweet romance and spurned love that does not fade in the new day all wrapped up neatly in fresh metaphor. So romantically creative Linda! Congratulations on your POTD! A wonderful achievement. All the best.
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 11:04 AM
Your words are warm and welcome Sam. Thank you for the visit and congrats! Linda
May Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 9:45 AM
Lovely write Linda, Congrats on POTD
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 9:46 AM
Thank you Joseph! Linda
Hankins Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 9:09 AM
Congratulations, Linda, on your P.O.T.D.
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 9:44 AM
Hi Milt. Thanks for the visit and the congrats! Linda
Lawrence Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 8:47 AM
Just beautiful Linda ! I love the nuance and emotions you have woven . Congratulations on POTD! Blessings, Susan:)
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 8:49 AM
Thank you so much Susan! Linda
Lawless Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 8:37 AM
Ah, but she is blessed to be pursued by two such magnificent lovers....nicely done Linda....and congrats on POTD
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 8:48 AM
Thank you John. Nice to have you visit and comment! Linda
Anaya Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Congratulations on POTD Linda! Your striking "Spurned Love" it's just a rotation away.
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 8:31 AM
Thank you Anaya. I appreciate your visit and congrats! Turn, turn, turn, Linda
Goldsmith Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 8:09 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 8:28 AM
Hi friend Paula. Thanks for the congrats! hugs to you, Linda
Mcgee Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 8:03 AM
This speaks of romance and loss. Nicely done. Congrats on your POTD
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 8:27 AM
Thank you for the kind visit Jeanne, and for the congrats! Linda
La France Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Linda, beautiful and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 7:57 AM
Many thanks Constance. I appreciate your visit and congrats! Linda
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 7:19 AM
A stellar creation Linda. Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! Blessings xxoo
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 7:49 AM
Thank you Connie. Yes, it is indeed an honor and I am gobsmacked! Linda
Pandit Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 6:48 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Linda. Enjoy your day.
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 7:11 AM
Hello Vijay my friend. Thank you for the second visit and the big congrats. I'm honored! Linda
Baker Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Linda. Nice imagery and feelings in your poem. Enjoy your special day! :-) Bill
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 7:11 AM
Many thanks for the supportive comments and congrats! Linda
Sands Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 6:26 AM
Congratulations for POTD . Enjoy :)
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 7:12 AM
Hello Heidi. Nice to see you again. Thank you for the congrats! Linda
George Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 3:50 AM
Lovely line of striking images.... ! Congratulations Linda on your sweet poem and its honor of POTD
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Thank you Valsa. Your supportive comments are most welcome! Linda
Seeker Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 2:42 AM
“The moon, jealous of her love, cried for the night’s loss.” ~ superb! Congrats on POTD, Linda
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 7:06 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and congrats! Linda
Kavanagh  Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 2:07 AM
What beautiful contrasting emotions Linda, exceptional POTD congratulations, cheers David
Fowler Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 7:06 AM
Thank you David! Linda
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