Spun Like Sugar

You ... Are spun like sugar Sweet sassy turned to linen Gossamer threads of fineness like cotton candy That melts on my tongue And turns me to Steel.

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 2/16/2018 10:24:00 AM

Very cool bop poetry, Greg! This second-generation beatnik dig the bongo crush groove of your psychedelic love lines, man. Getting a sugar hill rush fo' sho'. The opening and closing inversion ink blast was flower child rad. Cool pennings, my laidback, Tahiti-tanned friend. Love and more love always.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/22/2018 12:26:00 AM

Ha! You caught the groovy vibe, my man ... so stoked that you dug my crazy poem! Peace and love, Brotha! ;-)

John Hamilton

Date: 2/7/2018 9:30:00 AM

Yeah...got it...very nice Greg, what a way to wake up today! They do have a way with us don't they!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/10/2018 7:47:00 PM

They certainly do, my friend ... blessings and thanks, Bud! :-)