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Fire bursts in a flurry of fractured flames. Blue butterflies dance the Phoenix skyline. Speckles of light sneaking in by the frames Winter is past; spring is beyond the line. Brace the blazing beauty lost to blue blight. Gleeful, with a blest blithe sense of divine.  A fresh ray of optimism that shines bright. Rapture is synonymous with springtime. Swallows venture, daffodils come to light. Rich blooms, tulips, and a shield of lifetime Spring is coming to bear news of long days. Set life out of town while it is still time. We cheer at its ingress but mourn its sway. Buttercups and daisies loom here and there. Life wields as we wait for mirth to display. Fire bursts in a flurry of fractured flames. Buttercups and daisies loom here and there. Speckles of light sneaking in by the frames Strive to look for the sublime everywhere.
Written: April 08, 2023

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Date: 4/9/2023 5:05:00 PM
beautiful penning, a moment of grace and hapiness to share, have a good day
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Date: 4/9/2023 12:47:00 PM
- Beautifully described when "spring is coming to bear news of long days" ... a wonderful time, Las - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/9/2023 6:20:00 AM
As beautiful and pleasant as spring time, my friend. Splendid images!
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Date: 4/9/2023 1:26:00 AM
You handled a lot of alliteration. Pus I admire your imagery.
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Date: 4/9/2023 12:23:00 AM
Lovely poem full of hope and anticipation of a spring of beauty and blossoms ! Love every line of it. All the Best in the contest dear friend!
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Date: 4/8/2023 8:24:00 PM
Beautiful scenery you have written about with much to gain from your great poem, love it
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