Springtime - Nature Says

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Nature says create and rejuvenate.

Beasts cooperate and repopulate.

Sun’s rays dominate; showers saturate!

Blooms that fascinate soon accumulate.

Bees don’t hesitate to participate

as they pollinate. Isn’t springtime great!


Written April 28, 2017 
for John Hamilton's  Rhymers delight-internal monorhyme-2 Contest

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Bl Devnath

Date: 5/17/2017 11:37:00 AM

Wonderfully done my dear lovely friend. Congrats. Loved always, bl

Carole Duet

Date: 5/3/2017 10:44:00 PM

Amazingly clever, Andrea. Congrats on your well-deserved win.

Carole Duet

Date: 5/3/2017 10:44:00 PM

Amazingly clever, Andrea. Congrats on your well-deserved win.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/3/2017 7:01:00 PM

Andrea, this poem is very deserving of first place! Your internal rhyme makes this monorhyme exquisite! It never sounds forced and flows off the tongue like honey. Brava and big congratulations my friend. This s going into my faves. I will bet it will be used as an example of the monorhyme form here at Soup.; ) 7

Dean Wood

Date: 5/3/2017 10:44:00 AM

Congratulations! I really enjoyed this fun little poem. A well deserved win!

Mike Bayles

Date: 5/2/2017 1:20:00 PM

I like this poem. It's playful

Paul Callus

Date: 5/1/2017 4:54:00 PM

Yes, Andrea! Springtime is great, so is this Monorhyme. What could have stumped many of us you tackled with utmost ease and ability. I see that you placed first with this entry ... Congratulations! Regards ~ paul.