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Nature says create and rejuvenate. Beasts cooperate and repopulate. Sun’s rays dominate; showers saturate! Blooms that fascinate soon accumulate. Bees don’t hesitate to participate as they pollinate. Isn’t springtime great! Written April 28, 2017 for John Hamilton's Rhymers delight-internal monorhyme-2 Contest

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Date: 5/17/2017 11:37:00 AM
Wonderfully done my dear lovely friend. Congrats. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/3/2017 10:44:00 PM
Amazingly clever, Andrea. Congrats on your well-deserved win.
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Date: 5/3/2017 10:44:00 PM
Amazingly clever, Andrea. Congrats on your well-deserved win.
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Date: 5/3/2017 7:01:00 PM
Andrea, this poem is very deserving of first place! Your internal rhyme makes this monorhyme exquisite! It never sounds forced and flows off the tongue like honey. Brava and big congratulations my friend. This s going into my faves. I will bet it will be used as an example of the monorhyme form here at Soup.; ) 7
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Date: 5/3/2017 10:44:00 AM
Congratulations! I really enjoyed this fun little poem. A well deserved win!
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Date: 5/2/2017 1:20:00 PM
I like this poem. It's playful
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Date: 5/1/2017 4:54:00 PM
Yes, Andrea! Springtime is great, so is this Monorhyme. What could have stumped many of us you tackled with utmost ease and ability. I see that you placed first with this entry ... Congratulations! Regards ~ paul.
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Date: 5/1/2017 11:06:00 AM
A group effort! Congrats on your deserved top win, Andrea!
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Date: 5/1/2017 11:01:00 AM
Just swinging around again to congratulate you on your First Place! Well done! Regards, John.
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Date: 5/1/2017 8:51:00 AM
Wow, this one is superb Andrea!Congrats!
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Date: 5/1/2017 8:46:00 AM
Love the monorhymes! looks like you won with this one.. congratulations!
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Date: 5/1/2017 7:36:00 AM
Impressive Andrea.
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Date: 5/1/2017 7:17:00 AM
So beautifully written Andrea... Congratulations on your well deserved win.... I loved it... Lovely imagery... A big 7...
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Date: 5/1/2017 2:11:00 AM
Springtime is indeed great! Between you and me.. mostly for the morels I find! hehe. Love your poem, thank you for sharing
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Date: 5/1/2017 12:43:00 AM
Great response to the rhyming prompt. Congratulations is well-deserved.
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Date: 4/30/2017 7:55:00 PM
congrats to you, Andrea! This is really good! Loved it!
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Date: 4/30/2017 7:24:00 PM
Clever how you rhyme the important words and they work so well.
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Date: 4/30/2017 6:23:00 PM
Great win Andrea, your internal rhymes were spot on. Congrats
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Date: 4/30/2017 5:06:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 4/30/2017 4:51:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 4/30/2017 2:56:00 PM
Wonderful and very perfect, Andrea, congratulations on your win.. ~*
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Date: 4/30/2017 2:32:00 PM
way to go Andrea I knew this would place high for you:-) :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/30/2017 2:03:00 PM
Obviously a great rhyme, shared number 1 congrats Andrea!
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Date: 4/30/2017 11:00:00 AM
you make this contest look easy to do really well...good luck
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Date: 4/30/2017 9:45:00 AM
Lovely saying! Nature sings to those who carefully listen.
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