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Ottava Rima
A poem with a rhyme scheme of AB,AB,AB,CC with a syllable count of ten (10 in each line ). 

With dawn's light shining incredibly bright, I woke to the trickle of melting snow. Suggesting spring had arrived overnight, dripping icicles set my heart aglow. And though winter is still holding on tight, in a smattering of weeks, it'll let go. And flowers will start to pop from the ground whist snowdrifts shrink without making a sound. The honking of wild geese flocking back home, is a most welcomed tune to northern ears. For frozen lakes morph into liquid chrome, as ice crystals dissolve in spring's warm tears. And a cold white world, packed in styrofoam, revives, as it has for millions of years, resurrecting colors winter buried spring starts sprouting seeds, summer winds carried. I can't wait to see small patches of green polka dot the alabaster landscape. When snow no longer dominates the scene, skeletal shadows begin changing shape. And every breath of air smells fresh and clean, as a sunny sun offers some escape. For it shines with an optimistic glow, and soon, spring's beauty will begin to show. (Ottava Rima) 15/2/2021

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Date: 2/28/2021 9:22:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful Emile, Spring poetry at it’s best. Congratulations on your win... Belle
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/28/2021 12:00:00 PM
Thanks Belle, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/25/2021 6:44:00 AM
Emile, this is one of your best! Congrats on the top win with this springtime beauty.
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Date: 2/25/2021 7:03:00 AM
Thanks Jeanne, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2021 10:23:00 PM
Beautifully said.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/25/2021 7:02:00 AM
Thanks Rena, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2021 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful Spring write and picture. I Love your last line, "and soon, spring's beauty will begin to show." It well come out soon. Have a blessed day with your win..................
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/24/2021 11:38:00 AM
Thanks Paula, as always I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2021 6:26:00 AM
Emile, back to say congrats on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem _Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/24/2021 6:42:00 AM
Thanks Constance, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2021 6:07:00 AM
This is stunning Emile and signals Spring so colorfully. Congratulations on the top win! Linda
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/24/2021 6:41:00 AM
Thanks Linda, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2021 6:03:00 AM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Emile! A masterpiece! Janice
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/24/2021 6:40:00 AM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/24/2021 4:06:00 AM
This is wonderful, a lovely write. I am so glad you entered the Spring contest... Congrats on the top placement. God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/24/2021 6:40:00 AM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/20/2021 8:47:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderfully penned poem, great image too _Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/20/2021 10:17:00 AM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/19/2021 11:25:00 PM
Beautiful poem Emile...Congrats on your win :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/20/2021 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Carol, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/15/2021 9:43:00 AM
Such a beautiful piece of work, Emile. Be sure your go back and edit the word "guess" to read "geese," as what I suspect you meant. I, too, hate typos! Best of luck in the contest.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 5/15/2021 8:58:00 PM
Your welcome. This was too beautiful to let that go.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/15/2021 11:52:00 AM
Thanks so much L, I'm always grateful when people take the time to point out a typo my friend, and as always, I appreciate your comments, Emile.

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