Spring Valley

Sitting at glen’s edge,
pining the loss of summer
and idyllic rendezvous -
the noticeable disappearance
of luscious granny smiths
we cut in halves
and passionately rubbed
between a quartet
of burning thighs
to chill the desire -
after the writhing ceased.

Perhaps we spoke in similes,
debating the darker part of dawn -
the soft, highlighted slices
of your auburn hair
reflecting the sun's
secret midday voyeurism -
wispy strands of woven silk
complimenting the texture
and hue of imported burgundy wines
erotically sipped, 
tasted
and unintentionally
spilled?

Or maybe,
we didn’t speak at all -
perhaps our mouths
were silently engaged in activities
devoid of eating and speaking -
and the perspiration exchanged
was more essential than
simplistic bands
of knuckled gold;
wet and wanting 
an invitation 
to the honey-scented
catacombs of a private
teardrop.

The summer when
two ambitious hearts beat loudly
and became whole; 
we coupled and silently 
brushed our eyelashes against
a lost era. 
A time when innocence 
was a forgotten commodity -
and sincere happenstance
could not define the validity
of unconditional love;
whereas our 
sodden lips remembered
and conditionally 
did.





Dedicated to and written 
for my sweetheart -Margaret.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Crisci Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 6:40 PM
Big Congratulations on your fantastic win in Catie's contest, John! It's a lovely and inspiring poem filled with sentiments of Nostalgia and tenderness. God bless. Have a wonderful day. Kindest Regards, Andrew.
Roberts Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 7:38 AM
sensual piece well deserving of a win, congrats
Fraser Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 11:38 AM
Stunning poetry John, most deserved of it's podium placing in Catie's lovely contest >> James
Brown Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations John for your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Love Notes". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 8:52 PM
Lucky lady, Margaret. Very sensual poem, great win, John. Loved this line: silently brushed our eyelashes against a lost era. Andrea
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September 22, 2010 at 8:17 PM
Margaret is a lucky lady, John. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 2:13 PM
Congratulations on this super win in the contest, John
Sweetheart Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 1:49 PM
Congrats John on your big win in the Love Notes contest .. a wonderful write my friend ...enjoy your big win ... with luv..
Richards Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 1:29 PM
Ahh....I remember this so fondly! I loved this poem, John....breathtaking and wonderful!!! This is "POETRY" !!!~ :) love, Carrie
P. Avatar
February 14, 2009 at 6:20 AM
beautifully done, John!! congrats on your win! ~ Arany
Winter Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 9:30 AM
Congrats John on your win in Kristin's contest. Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 11:38 PM
Congrats on your success in Kristin's contest John.rgds Brian
Ginn Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 7:43 PM
Ahh what a Valentine present Margaret has now. Congratulations and a big wooooohoooo, Laurie
Richards Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 7:34 PM
I was so amazed by this poem the first time I read it and once again today, in the winning poem section. This is so filled with passion and tenderness. Well done, as always...you are so remarkable as a poet! Love reading your works! Congratulations! Carrie
La France Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 7:27 PM
Congrats.. its a beautiful love poem for your sweetheart ..
Jordan Avatar
February 12, 2009 at 6:06 PM
John congratulations on placing in Kristin's contest - God Bless, MJ
Weber Avatar
February 8, 2009 at 5:37 PM
Passionate use of language here, John! I particularly appreciate the form and content; the concept of love being a living entity beyond mere flesh springs to my mind when reading this. Deep, personal yet undeniably universal! Warm regards, John.
Gumbo Avatar
February 8, 2009 at 5:13 PM
breathless... you left me. wow, I say with a slight blush!
Mckenzie Avatar
February 7, 2009 at 7:13 PM
My friend John a masterpiece of woven passion and a story only told as grand as you can tell it. You kept me wanting more of this in depth love story as though as I was there myself watching.Just so lovely it made me melt. Love Laura :)
Burton Avatar
February 7, 2009 at 6:59 PM
Had to check this poem out again because it stirs the amagination to such degree. Anyway thank you again for the information and have a great day or night.
Jordan Avatar
February 5, 2009 at 6:31 PM
Wow John this is just amazing - I do love and admire the way you pen out your words - You are an excellent poet - God Bless, MJ
Ehigiator Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 11:02 PM
So beautifully written with the deepest passion and intimacy..so much love and desire expressed in the greatest form, what a blessing it is to have someone you feel that way about..Awesome write, love the wondrous imagery!!!God Bless you and best wishes to you in your writing*Tyesha
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 3, 2009 at 7:18 AM
Still an awesome write. Old style, old fashion romanticism. Beautifully done. Vince
Mason Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 3:23 PM
Such a wonderfully poetic write here, John!! I just love the line: "to the honey-scented catacombs of our private raindrops" WOW !!All the best to you and your Margaret!!
Richards Avatar
February 1, 2009 at 1:57 PM
Having trouble with my computer...so hope this comment goes through ...just want to say I missed this poem until now...but reading it blew me away! Whoa...you are truly amazing once again....hot, romantic, skilled writing at it's best! ....my oh my....
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