Spring Stars

the gentleness of Spring stars...cool breeze through screen door 5/7/2018

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Constance La France

Date: 5/9/2018 8:35:00 AM

Kim, very nice and dreamy, love it ...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2018 9:34:00 AM

Thanks, Constance!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 5/9/2018 6:28:00 AM

Excellent monoku. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/9/2018 6:52:00 AM

Thanks, Ravi!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2018 6:18:00 PM

This is so very pretty!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2018 7:35:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea!

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/8/2018 1:03:00 PM

Don't cha just love that feeling? Well written feeling-thought, Kim - love it. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2018 2:44:00 PM

Thanks, CayCay!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/8/2018 9:26:00 AM

Makes me think of sitting on a screened porch watching the stars come out - a perfect spring evening!

Pailey Gordon
Date: 5/8/2018 9:49:00 AM

Exactly the same thought here!!

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/7/2018 10:35:00 PM

A breathtaking monoku, Kim. Exquisite, I can smell the freshness now.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2018 6:41:00 AM

Thanks, Line! A lovely Spring we are having!