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Spring Showers

Spring Showers

I was born in the spring, the sound of the drops,
When the slopes of the snow melted stale,
Golden bird swing
Playfully taking off.

And the flocks were gathering in the sky, the clouds,
Burned in pools solar copper
Lake smoke fragrant frost
Not keep the night cold.

And cry spring breath,
Blowing off roofs track rigmarole.
Winter at his last gasp
Filmed faded bed.

Was the trail, sparkling rays
Spring, azure in the sky blue,
Merry splashing streams,
Murmuring, and repeating his chant.

I was born in the spring, in the lodge white
I smiled at the windows bullfinches,
I talked to them and sang,
Droplets playing until dawn.

Spring Showers
30.03.2013
Nick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/20/2013 6:19:00 PM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 4/20/2013 7:11:00 AM
Great imagery. Congrats.
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Date: 4/18/2013 4:12:00 PM
Congratulations on winning. SuZ
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Date: 4/18/2013 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations Nick on 1st place win with this lovely write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 4/17/2013 6:33:00 PM
Beautiful, percent number one win. Images flowed loved it j
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Date: 4/17/2013 2:30:00 PM
Congrats on your great win..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 4/17/2013 10:19:00 AM
Very nice work..congrats. I especially like the last stanza. BG
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Date: 4/17/2013 9:13:00 AM
CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN NICK.
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Date: 4/17/2013 8:25:00 AM
Nick, nice to see the melted stale imagery in your poem. Congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Spring Shower" contest. Nothing better than a lovely dawn feeling. *Always & Forever~LINDA
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Date: 4/17/2013 7:55:00 AM
congrats, my friend, on such a powerful and deserving win.... Jake
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Date: 4/17/2013 6:39:00 AM
Well deserved top win! Donna
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Date: 4/17/2013 2:18:00 AM
Congratulations Nick, well done ......Seren
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Date: 4/16/2013 9:43:00 PM
Congrats for your win, very beautifully described. Terry xoxo
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Date: 3/29/2013 5:47:00 PM
Nice poem.
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