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3/30/2025 for Spring Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania KItchin

spring mountain spring

melting snow trickles
fish pivot in unison
in clear, clean water

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/9/2025 3:10:00 AM

Snow drops trickling the fish pivot... a romantic scene. Congratulations!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 4/7/2025 8:36:00 PM

beautiful dear friend. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

David Crandall
Date: 4/7/2025 8:39:00 PM

Thanks Thriveni!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2025 10:53:00 AM

A beautiful picture with words. Great title. Congrats

David Crandall
Date: 4/6/2025 3:23:00 PM

Thanks Andrea!

Crystol Woods

Date: 4/6/2025 10:48:00 AM

I love this the most! A clear image in my mind and brings with it all the spring happenings that wake all my senses. Perfection! Fav! Xo

David Crandall
Date: 4/6/2025 3:23:00 PM

Hi Crystol - thanks!

David Crandall
Date: 4/6/2025 3:23:00 PM

Hi Crystol - thanks!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2025 10:01:00 AM

- Congratulations on your spring haiku, David :) - hugs

David Crandall
Date: 4/6/2025 3:23:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/6/2025 8:05:00 AM

Perfect visage Dave. Congratulations! :)

David Crandall
Date: 4/6/2025 3:22:00 PM

Thanks elle!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/6/2025 7:07:00 AM

David, a wonderful haiku with fresh spring imagery. Congratulations on your winning placement.

David Crandall
Date: 4/6/2025 3:22:00 PM

Thanks Tania, it was fun!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/2/2025 11:10:00 AM

Pretty imagery, David!

David Crandall
Date: 4/2/2025 1:05:00 PM

Thanks Kim!

John Read

Date: 3/31/2025 9:13:00 AM

Hi David it's been such a long time since we had snow in London, enjoyed reading your Haiku wish you well in the contest.

David Crandall
Date: 3/31/2025 10:30:00 AM

I've never been there. I always imagine snow in the Winter in London, though.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/31/2025 4:17:00 AM

I am sure that is a beautiful scene, David. I can imagine how cold that water must be. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

David Crandall
Date: 3/31/2025 10:30:00 AM

I remember drinking that cold fresh water as a kid, yes, very cold!

David Crandall
Date: 3/31/2025 10:28:00 AM

I remember drinking that cold fresh water as a kid, yes, very cold!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/31/2025 2:31:00 AM

- Great written, David :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

David Crandall
Date: 3/31/2025 10:28:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise!

Karen Jones

Date: 3/31/2025 12:20:00 AM

Nice

David Crandall
Date: 3/31/2025 10:27:00 AM

:-)

spring mountain spring

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