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3/30/2025 for Spring Haiku Poetry Contest sponsored by Tania KItchin

melting snow trickles fish pivot in unison in clear, clean water

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Date: 4/9/2025 3:10:00 AM
Snow drops trickling the fish pivot... a romantic scene. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/7/2025 8:36:00 PM
beautiful dear friend. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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David Crandall
Date: 4/7/2025 8:39:00 PM
Thanks Thriveni!
Date: 4/6/2025 10:53:00 AM
A beautiful picture with words. Great title. Congrats
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David Crandall
Date: 4/6/2025 3:23:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 4/6/2025 10:48:00 AM
I love this the most! A clear image in my mind and brings with it all the spring happenings that wake all my senses. Perfection! Fav! Xo
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David Crandall
Date: 4/6/2025 3:23:00 PM
Hi Crystol - thanks!
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David Crandall
Date: 4/6/2025 3:23:00 PM
Hi Crystol - thanks!
Date: 4/6/2025 10:01:00 AM
- Congratulations on your spring haiku, David :) - hugs
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Date: 4/6/2025 3:23:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise!
Date: 4/6/2025 8:05:00 AM
Perfect visage Dave. Congratulations! :)
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David Crandall
Date: 4/6/2025 3:22:00 PM
Thanks elle!
Date: 4/6/2025 7:07:00 AM
David, a wonderful haiku with fresh spring imagery. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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David Crandall
Date: 4/6/2025 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Tania, it was fun!
Date: 4/2/2025 11:10:00 AM
Pretty imagery, David!
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David Crandall
Date: 4/2/2025 1:05:00 PM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 3/31/2025 9:13:00 AM
Hi David it's been such a long time since we had snow in London, enjoyed reading your Haiku wish you well in the contest.
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David Crandall
Date: 3/31/2025 10:30:00 AM
I've never been there. I always imagine snow in the Winter in London, though.
Date: 3/31/2025 4:17:00 AM
I am sure that is a beautiful scene, David. I can imagine how cold that water must be. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 3/31/2025 10:30:00 AM
I remember drinking that cold fresh water as a kid, yes, very cold!
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David Crandall
Date: 3/31/2025 10:28:00 AM
I remember drinking that cold fresh water as a kid, yes, very cold!
Date: 3/31/2025 2:31:00 AM
- Great written, David :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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David Crandall
Date: 3/31/2025 10:28:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise!
Date: 3/31/2025 12:20:00 AM
Nice
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David Crandall
Date: 3/31/2025 10:27:00 AM
:-)

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