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Spring Love 

The majesty of pine trees heavy laden with snow 
Sparkle in dawn's dappled light with a glistening glow.
Monumental mountaintops survey valleys down below.
Dwelling in the snow's melt enchanted rippling rivers flow.
Spring's early footsteps lead to where the gardens grow.
Soon daffodils and tulips will display a springtime show.

He loved the majesty of pine trees showered in snow.
We watched dawn's dappled light with a glistening glow,
And skied from mountaintop to the valley down below.
We marveled as snow melted into rippling river's flow,
And walked amidst the garden as spring coaxed it to grow.
We married while bright tulips put on a springtime show!

 1-16-18

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/22/2019 4:57:00 AM
Wow, monorhyme is a hellishly hard genre. At least, in Russian. It's definitely a masterpiece of it.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/22/2019 11:42:00 AM
Thank you very much Kurt. You honor me with this lovely comment. : )
Date: 6/25/2018 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this beautiful poem! Well done.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 6/25/2018 9:07:00 PM
Thank you Susan. : )
Date: 6/24/2018 3:03:00 PM
ahhh, you did it. You managed to get one of the three actual number placements in this contest. Congratulations, Connie!!WEll deserved!
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Date: 6/24/2018 8:43:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea. I didn't have much hope and was surprised and honored to get my second placement! Thanks a lot my friend. Did you enter this one? I know you have some wonderful spring poems, but maybe not Monorhyme? xxoo
Date: 6/24/2018 2:53:00 PM
Back with a Big Congratulations on your win !!!!!!!
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Date: 6/24/2018 1:49:00 PM
Dazzling imagery, sparkling rhyme, all topped off by a picture-book marriage. ... Richly-deserved winner, Connie. Great to see you "back in action." Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 6/24/2018 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Connie! :) xomo!
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Date: 6/24/2018 8:02:00 AM
You have explained it so beautifully, I love the imagery in it, many congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest
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Date: 1/25/2018 9:31:00 PM
Love the imagery , Connie.. Hope you are doing well..Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/24/2018 11:27:00 AM
Love the images that come with this beautiful poem Connie. love phyl
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Date: 1/23/2018 7:36:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and lovely rhythm and rhyme in your lush romantic poem Connie. A poem wondrously expressed with love. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Date: 1/23/2018 5:22:00 AM
Very cleverly executed and beautifully phrased, Connie. At times, when reading through poems like this, I think I should try and adopt a more rigid writing style; having said that my poems always seem to lead me! My very warmest regards, Connie. :) john
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Date: 1/22/2018 12:51:00 AM
Nicely done well penned. .. we are still in winter, I don't know where you are?
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Date: 1/21/2018 11:25:00 PM
Your scenic imagery is exquisite as always my dear Connie. I loved your descriptions and the images. Maria xxx
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Date: 1/21/2018 10:07:00 PM
Beautiful imagery in this poem! Outstanding...thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful week...Donna:-)
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Date: 1/20/2018 9:43:00 PM
Such a clever and beautiful rhyme Connie!...love both the pics too:)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/21/2018 2:06:00 AM
Monorhymes are tricky and a bit of a challenge. To me love and the beauty of nature go together synergistically. Thank you much Chris! : )
Date: 1/20/2018 12:26:00 AM
Magnificent!!!! I love your poetry! Thank you for sharing. :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/21/2018 2:08:00 AM
Wow Jeremiah....thank you for such a great comment! It is much appreciated! : )
Date: 1/19/2018 9:14:00 PM
Delightful work, Connie; very romantic and beautiful.
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Date: 1/19/2018 3:36:00 PM
Ah...a spring wedding:) No wonder this season holds a special place in your heart, Connie. Beautiful imagery and rhyme, and a lovely romantic ending to go with it all. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 1/19/2018 3:44:00 PM
This was not my wedding but another's Paul. Thank you very much. I was visualising Amsterdam in the spring with the tulip gardens. : )
Date: 1/19/2018 8:36:00 AM
Beautifully written and wonderful imagery...a delight!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/19/2018 1:22:00 PM
Thank you very much Donna. Nice to meet you! Aloha, Connie
Date: 1/18/2018 7:41:00 PM
For that dish you told me, Aki is a good word. Does it rhyme with YUKKI??Geez, people eat such strange things. I think I can catch up here and finally start doing my dishes. Getting my weekend all cleared for movies!!!
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Date: 1/18/2018 3:25:00 PM
A lovely write Connie...
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/19/2018 1:16:00 PM
Thank you Joseph. I seldom write Monorhymes as they are a challenge. ; )
Date: 1/18/2018 12:53:00 PM
I enjoyed the pairing of words with these lovely photos.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/19/2018 1:23:00 PM
Thank you very much Richard. Have a great day! : )
Date: 1/18/2018 1:03:00 AM
this poem snow-sparkles!!! What a gem!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/18/2018 9:14:00 AM
Thank you Andrea. I can see you have been really busy. Much love, Connie : ) xxoo
Date: 1/17/2018 5:16:00 PM
Beautiful emotion and flow. I can really see the colors.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/18/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thank you Dale. I always enjoy your poetry. : )
Date: 1/17/2018 2:31:00 PM
inspiration can only spring from the words that you bring just as the birds sing as children play upon the swing awed at natures perfect bling riding bikes with bells that ding experiencing events that they can never find on bing....Life is renewed every spring....Beautifully awesome connie....;)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/18/2018 9:12:00 AM
I loved your sweet poetic comment Eric. Thank you very much! : )
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