Spring, Let Me Reclaim You

Dreaming of gaily-colored tulips
    red's majesty, iris purple
      sunburst yellow...

  Eyes grown heavy, curtains closing
    a smile dancing on dewy lips
      envisioning a soft April's morn...

  O, Spring, let me reclaim you
    if only for this moment
      if only in this dream
    


     ~ November 09, 2022 ~
 Entry in a Brian Strand Premiere 
            Poetry Contest
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M  Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 11:50 PM
Lovely poem Big Bad…..Congratulations on POTD….Well deserved!! Debx
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 12:23 PM
Even when I am Big Bad, POTD makes me 'little good.' lol
Nicole Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 5:46 PM
Gershon, just reminding you that anything is possible in a dream. :) Just close your eyes and imagine, "a smile dancing on dewy lips." Spring is in the air. (Well, in our dreams for now). Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 12:22 PM
Thank you so much, Brandy. ~ gw
Doll Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 4:46 PM
Gershon, Wonderful poem. Congratulations on POTD. I too am already longing for Spring~ Warren
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 12:22 PM
You won't have 'long' to wait. ~ Believe in CC (Climate Change)
Mccann Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:59 PM
Congratulations, Gershon! on the POTD, but also on the idea of reclaiming Spring. As I grow older, I become more like our ancient ancestors, uncertain if Spring will come again. Elizabeth
Wolf Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 12:21 PM
The way things have changed in my lifetime, I wonder if the leaves will fall on top of the snow, or whether they'll be raked before the first snow comes. We'll see...
Gorelick Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:02 PM
Pleasant notion to ponder. Congratulations on POTD GW! Robert
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:19 PM
May we always ponder pleasantly! Thank you, Robert!
Slaughter Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 11:29 AM
A lovely piece for POTD, G., and a lovely thought to help get us through til then. BOL in Brian's contest.
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:19 PM
Aw, Spring'll be here before you know it, Jim. (Hope!) Thanks, gw
Flood Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 11:17 AM
Congrats on POTD, GW. Smashing write. Terry
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Left one more pumpkin to smash in November, I guess. ~ gw
Buehler Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 11:07 AM
I am back with warmest congratulations on POTD, Gershon. Kindest regards, Evelyn
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:18 PM
Much appreciated, Evelyn. Have a super weekend. :) gw
Anaya Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations Gershon Wolf on your Poem of the day!!! HAVE A GREAT VETERANS DAY!!!:D
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:17 PM
Hey, Thanks, Anaya: 75th wedding anniversary of my parents. (I'm the only one left to mark the occasion, though).
Delaney Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 10:23 AM
Wow, Gershon: This is so beautiful. Congratulations on POTD. SuZ
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:17 PM
SuZ, thanks for noticing this POTD. Happiness and Light, gw
Fowler Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 10:12 AM
Wonderful imagery and dreaming Gershon. Congratulations on the honor of your POTD!
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:16 PM
Imagery's usually better when I'm dreaming, Linda. Thanks and have a wonderful weekend. :) gw
Parker Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 9:45 AM
Cool images, Mr. Wolf. POTD indeed! ;o)
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:16 PM
Cool images, for a warm time of the year. Thanks, Arlo.
Edmonds  Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 9:34 AM
When it’s spring again, we’ll sing again. A lovely poem Gershon. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
Edmonds  Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 1:38 AM
I say, wouldn’t it be loverly… Belle
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:15 PM
Aw, let's sneak in a song every time there's a Spring-like day from now through March 15. What do you say?! Thanks, Belle
Poet Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on your amply deserved POTD, Gershon. This a lovely poem in my Fave for very well-written poetry.
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:14 PM
Whoa! A Fave: So much appreciated. Thank YOU! :) gw
George Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 8:49 AM
Back to your lovely poem with Congratulations on your POTD, Gershon
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:14 PM
Thanks for coming around a second time, Valsa. Blessings, Gershon
Hankins Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 8:37 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your P.O.T.D., gw!
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 12:14 PM
Appreciated, Milt. Have a great weekend. ~ gw
May Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 8:16 AM
Spring with all its colors, Congrats on POTD Gershon
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 8:35 AM
Colors and scents of fresh breezes. Ah! Thanks, Joseph!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 8:01 AM
Congratulations, Gershon, on your POTD! A lovely verse, and a lovely dream! Ha ha , it's only November!
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 8:34 AM
--and a lovely comment, Mala! It may only be November, but I feel Spring a-coming!
Gentile Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 7:08 AM
Gershon, a big congratulations on your POTD! Happy Friday!
Baker Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 7:03 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, my friend. Pleasant thoughts in well written poetry, Gershon. A good entry for the contest. Thanks for sharing, Bill
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 8:32 AM
Bill, thank you for noticing this potd. Have a great weekend, Gershon
Roper Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 6:46 AM
Beautiful verse, Gershon, congratulations on POTD and good luck in Brian's contest. Many blessing my friend
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 8:32 AM
Appreciate your good wishes, Eve. Happiness and Joy, Gershon
La France Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 6:38 AM
Gershon, a lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 8:31 AM
Thanks for noticing my POTD, Constance. Happy Weekend! :) gw
Kitchin Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 5:20 AM
Gershon, a lovely poem with beautiful Spring imagery, congratulations on POTD!
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 6:43 AM
Hey, Tania. Appreciate your nice comment and have a great weekend! Happiness and Joy, Gershon
Gondolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 4:42 AM
Late November always leaves me wishing I could recapture Spring but alas, those days are gone. Nicely penned, Gershon, congrats on being named POTD. Cheers, John
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 6:42 AM
Alas and alack. And yet, absence makes the heart grow fonder. Thank you for noticing this potd, John. Have a wonderful weekend, Gershon
Andresen Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 3:12 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... a lovely poem, Gershon :) - hugs
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2022 at 6:41 AM
Thank you for noticing this potd, Anne-Lise. Here's to a Spring-like weekend for you! ~ Gershon
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