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Spring, Let Me Reclaim You

Dreaming of gaily-colored tulips red's majesty, iris purple sunburst yellow... Eyes grown heavy, curtains closing a smile dancing on dewy lips envisioning a soft April's morn... O, Spring, let me reclaim you if only for this moment if only in this dream ~ November 09, 2022 ~ Entry in a Brian Strand Premiere Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/11/2022 11:50:00 PM
Lovely poem Big Bad…..Congratulations on POTD….Well deserved!! Debx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2022 12:23:00 PM
Even when I am Big Bad, POTD makes me 'little good.' lol
Date: 11/11/2022 5:46:00 PM
Gershon, just reminding you that anything is possible in a dream. :) Just close your eyes and imagine, "a smile dancing on dewy lips." Spring is in the air. (Well, in our dreams for now). Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2022 12:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Brandy. ~ gw
Date: 11/11/2022 4:46:00 PM
Gershon, Wonderful poem. Congratulations on POTD. I too am already longing for Spring~ Warren
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2022 12:22:00 PM
You won't have 'long' to wait. ~ Believe in CC (Climate Change)
Date: 11/11/2022 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations, Gershon! on the POTD, but also on the idea of reclaiming Spring. As I grow older, I become more like our ancient ancestors, uncertain if Spring will come again. Elizabeth
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/13/2022 12:21:00 PM
The way things have changed in my lifetime, I wonder if the leaves will fall on top of the snow, or whether they'll be raked before the first snow comes. We'll see...
Date: 11/11/2022 12:02:00 PM
Pleasant notion to ponder. Congratulations on POTD GW! Robert
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 12:19:00 PM
May we always ponder pleasantly! Thank you, Robert!
Date: 11/11/2022 11:29:00 AM
A lovely piece for POTD, G., and a lovely thought to help get us through til then. BOL in Brian's contest.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 12:19:00 PM
Aw, Spring'll be here before you know it, Jim. (Hope!) Thanks, gw
Date: 11/11/2022 11:17:00 AM
Congrats on POTD, GW. Smashing write. Terry
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 12:18:00 PM
Left one more pumpkin to smash in November, I guess. ~ gw
Date: 11/11/2022 11:07:00 AM
I am back with warmest congratulations on POTD, Gershon. Kindest regards, Evelyn
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 12:18:00 PM
Much appreciated, Evelyn. Have a super weekend. :) gw
Date: 11/11/2022 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations Gershon Wolf on your Poem of the day!!! HAVE A GREAT VETERANS DAY!!!:D
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 12:17:00 PM
Hey, Thanks, Anaya: 75th wedding anniversary of my parents. (I'm the only one left to mark the occasion, though).
Date: 11/11/2022 10:23:00 AM
Wow, Gershon: This is so beautiful. Congratulations on POTD. SuZ
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 12:17:00 PM
SuZ, thanks for noticing this POTD. Happiness and Light, gw
Date: 11/11/2022 10:12:00 AM
Wonderful imagery and dreaming Gershon. Congratulations on the honor of your POTD!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 12:16:00 PM
Imagery's usually better when I'm dreaming, Linda. Thanks and have a wonderful weekend. :) gw
Date: 11/11/2022 9:45:00 AM
Cool images, Mr. Wolf. POTD indeed! ;o)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 12:16:00 PM
Cool images, for a warm time of the year. Thanks, Arlo.
Date: 11/11/2022 9:34:00 AM
When it’s spring again, we’ll sing again. A lovely poem Gershon. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/12/2022 1:38:00 AM
I say, wouldn’t it be loverly… Belle
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 12:15:00 PM
Aw, let's sneak in a song every time there's a Spring-like day from now through March 15. What do you say?! Thanks, Belle
Date: 11/11/2022 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your amply deserved POTD, Gershon. This a lovely poem in my Fave for very well-written poetry.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 12:14:00 PM
Whoa! A Fave: So much appreciated. Thank YOU! :) gw
Date: 11/11/2022 8:49:00 AM
Back to your lovely poem with Congratulations on your POTD, Gershon
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 12:14:00 PM
Thanks for coming around a second time, Valsa. Blessings, Gershon
Date: 11/11/2022 8:37:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your P.O.T.D., gw!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 12:14:00 PM
Appreciated, Milt. Have a great weekend. ~ gw
Date: 11/11/2022 8:16:00 AM
Spring with all its colors, Congrats on POTD Gershon
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 8:35:00 AM
Colors and scents of fresh breezes. Ah! Thanks, Joseph!
Date: 11/11/2022 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations, Gershon, on your POTD! A lovely verse, and a lovely dream! Ha ha , it's only November!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 8:34:00 AM
--and a lovely comment, Mala! It may only be November, but I feel Spring a-coming!
Date: 11/11/2022 7:08:00 AM
Gershon, a big congratulations on your POTD! Happy Friday!
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Date: 11/11/2022 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, my friend. Pleasant thoughts in well written poetry, Gershon. A good entry for the contest. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 8:32:00 AM
Bill, thank you for noticing this potd. Have a great weekend, Gershon
Date: 11/11/2022 6:46:00 AM
Beautiful verse, Gershon, congratulations on POTD and good luck in Brian's contest. Many blessing my friend
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 8:32:00 AM
Appreciate your good wishes, Eve. Happiness and Joy, Gershon
Date: 11/11/2022 6:38:00 AM
Gershon, a lovely poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 8:31:00 AM
Thanks for noticing my POTD, Constance. Happy Weekend! :) gw
Date: 11/11/2022 5:20:00 AM
Gershon, a lovely poem with beautiful Spring imagery, congratulations on POTD!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 6:43:00 AM
Hey, Tania. Appreciate your nice comment and have a great weekend! Happiness and Joy, Gershon
Date: 11/11/2022 4:42:00 AM
Late November always leaves me wishing I could recapture Spring but alas, those days are gone. Nicely penned, Gershon, congrats on being named POTD. Cheers, John
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 6:42:00 AM
Alas and alack. And yet, absence makes the heart grow fonder. Thank you for noticing this potd, John. Have a wonderful weekend, Gershon
Date: 11/11/2022 3:12:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... a lovely poem, Gershon :) - hugs
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/11/2022 6:41:00 AM
Thank you for noticing this potd, Anne-Lise. Here's to a Spring-like weekend for you! ~ Gershon
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