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Two Haiku For Spring

scent of grass in the waterfall's mist . . . your breath on my cheek pink blossoms against a blue sky. . . . my mother weeps From 5/9/14 For Line Gauthier's Bite Size Contest No 63 Poetry Contest

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/9/2017 9:20:00 PM

I love this :)

Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 11:51:00 AM

you have a hand for this. Besides here on the soup, do you teach your ESL students haiku. * Forever ~SKAT~

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/24/2015 5:48:00 PM

forgot to answer this question of yours. No, I have not tried teaching them haiku. I don't teach things that allow me to incorporate poetry.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/16/2014 10:25:00 PM

Oh these are lovely Andrea. Congratulations on your deserving win of second place. You have so many in First Place I think I should just Congratulate you for all of them here. I have read all of your winning poems and I don't know how you do it. My time is too limited to make as many comments as you do and to enter as many contests, so Brava my friend!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/16/2014 9:01:00 PM

Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, Andrea

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/16/2014 5:10:00 PM

Good going girl..(smile). love it. BG

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/16/2014 4:43:00 PM

Yes she does Paul, she one of the few people who TRIED to get how to write haiku through my head! THANKS Andie [I do know my way is not the only way ;)] Congrad's Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/16/2014 8:26:00 PM

thanks so much for saying this, Debs. You are someone who truly tries to get things right and what Freddie said in his blog is just wrong!! I loved your contest and you did nothing wrong in your directions to us. You want only to help others and grow alongside them.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/16/2014 1:07:00 PM

Wow! two beautiful haiku! You've got the 'haiku touch'. Congratulations on a merited win:) // paul

David Mohn

Date: 5/16/2014 11:24:00 AM

Beautiful Andrea...congrats

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/16/2014 9:15:00 AM

Great job, Andrea! It was so nice to share the top of the list with you..........boy was I surprised, haikus never come easy !! Congratulations!

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 5/16/2014 7:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonder win with this amazing Haiku

Linda Jackson

Date: 5/16/2014 7:33:00 AM

Your poem is perfect. Congratulations on your success. Linda x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 5/16/2014 5:55:00 AM

Wonderful Andrea ! U probably know what Debbie wants !! Congrats on huge win !

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/16/2014 1:03:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS ANDREA.. :)

Lisa Lee

Date: 5/15/2014 9:48:00 PM

Huge Congratulations, Andrea on a well deserved win! Truly beautiful write!

Elaine George

Date: 5/14/2014 5:19:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful Haiku's, Andrea. And....thank you for your kind comments. Elaine .

Monterey Sirak

Date: 5/14/2014 5:01:00 AM

Amazing!!!!! I don't think there is any form you cannot master. Oh, the scent of grass, now that is the smell of spring.

Darren Watson

Date: 5/13/2014 10:05:00 AM

Not a form of poetry I'm familiar with but I loved this .

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/12/2014 11:04:00 AM

this is totally sensory and inviting, andie.. i thought the ku was supposed to be objective, so mine was probably not in sync wit what debbie wanted... thanks for considering my work for your quatern contest...happyb huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/12/2014 6:06:00 AM

Way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the honor of being honored in your contest..I did not know that there were suppose to be eight syllables per line..I missed that when I read about quatern..I saw that there was not set meter and missed the other part..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 5/11/2014 5:28:00 PM

awesome haiku, Andrea - a sure winner here

Ken Carroll

Date: 5/11/2014 1:55:00 PM

Righteous writing Andrea..Hope your having a wonderful Mother's day!

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/11/2014 8:46:00 AM

Excellent poetry here! Hope you are enjoying the warmer days! Went to a reading yesterday in Manhattan and sold a book and traded for another book. Do you go to readings where you live? There plenty of them in NYC - the Big Apple where whatever you are into you can find someone else how is into it to! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/11/2014 5:04:00 AM

Ohhhh Andrea, I love these, especially the last two. You are really getting great at writing haiku. I think she should love these.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/10/2014 7:02:00 PM

Lovely writes on spring....I love the 2nd haiku the best. Hugs

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/10/2014 3:54:00 PM

Very nice haiku on spring. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl