Spring Hope

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20 Best Spring Quotes - Inspirational and Funny Sayings About Spring

drip, drip, drip outside the snow is melting birds sing so joyful the sky azure blue I jump potholes oh this is Spring the air is fresh the sun shining happy thoughts feel rebirth there is hope goodbye winter snow _______________________ February 28, 2021 Poetry/Diminished Hexaverse/Spring Hope Copyright Protected, ID 02-1333-046-28 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Spring Diminised Hexaverse sponsor, Caren Krutsinger, Judged,04/03/2021

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/4/2021 6:32:00 AM

Love this poem very much, Constance! Beautiful imageries in so few words ~ Mala

Constance La France
Date: 3/4/2021 7:13:00 AM

Mala, thank you it was a joy to write this poem -_Constance

Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/2/2021 3:44:00 PM

This is a very well done diminished hexaverse. Amazing imagery! Good luck in the contest, Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2021 5:08:00 PM

Edward, thanks for visiting and for the compliment _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2021 6:45:00 PM

I love how you did this. GREAT ending, so important with this form, Dear Heart

Constance La France
Date: 3/1/2021 1:24:00 AM

Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, so grateful _Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2021 1:10:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me. Way to go. I feel spring is in the air here but we still could have some cold....Not out of the woods yet. Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 2/28/2021 2:25:00 PM

Sara, thanks for the compliment and comment, we are spring like here but I am sure winter is not finished with us yet _Constance