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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ spring breeze, gentle like mother's tender touch nothing quite as amazing as an early spring day

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Bill Baker

Date: 3/13/2024 9:49:00 PM

I like your springy Kimo poem, Sara. I'm ready to get my Spring on! Hugs, Bill

Paige Hind

Date: 3/13/2024 5:27:00 PM

Beautiful- true, I can envision spring with the warmer weather coming.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 6:05:00 PM

thanks, Paige...gosh me too! Spring is my favorite season. Have a splendid spring evening, hugs, Sara

Christina Bowring

Date: 3/13/2024 11:08:00 AM

Dear Sara, this is such a delightful Kimo (new form to me) accompanied by the vivid picture. I love the delicate breeze of spring, the fresh air of new life which you have beautifully captured here. ‘ like mother’s gentle touch ‘ is such a wonderful simile to describe it. I’m also thinking of the arms of Mother Nature as I read your appreciation for this glorious season. Loved it. Hugs and many happy spring days to you for this time of year. Xx

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 6:05:00 PM

thank you, Christina, for visiting. Your comments were so uplifting and encouraging. Glad you liked the 'nature' of my words...Wishing you a splendid spring evening, hugs, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/13/2024 9:37:00 AM

Dear Sara, your work is beautifully simplistic yet deeply emotional. March is a unique month, embodying both the softness of spring and the lingering power of winter. Your poem captures this dichotomy perfectly.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 6:03:00 PM

thank you for your kind words, dear Sotto, and for your insights into the dichotomy that March is. Grateful for you and your consistent visits, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Lin Lane

Date: 3/13/2024 9:27:00 AM

I could stand outside on an early spring morning and just breathe it in. It's filled with the perfume of blooms and hope of what lies ahead. I felt it this morning on a walk... barely daylight.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 6:02:00 PM

gosh, me too, Lin. I love the smell of the air this time of year...all the hope and renewal! I walked this morning too at daylight...I felt so rejuvenated. thanks for stopping by & have a great evening, hugs, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/13/2024 3:37:00 AM

- March is a strange month, Sara ... soft as spring ... powerful as winter ... "King Winter" doesn't let go easily - A beautiful poem :) - hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 4:18:00 AM

thank you for your visit and comments. I agree. 'King Winter' does easily relinquish is reign. Glad you found my poem beautiful. Have a splendid day, hugs, Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2024 9:58:00 PM

Very lovely. And thanks for your comment on my Tattered poem.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 4:19:00 AM

I appreciate your kind words, Andrea. Always grateful for your visits...you're welcome for my comments on 'Tattered.' Have a pleasant day, hugs, Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/12/2024 7:53:00 PM

Yes, indeed! And we had one in Chicago today. About 72 degrees, no humidity, and that gentle spring breeze. Nothing like it. Huzzah!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 4:20:00 AM

what a delightful spring day you had. We had a day like that on Sunday; then clouds rolled in on Monday; windy and chilly but at least not bone crunching cold. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/12/2024 7:28:00 PM

Sara you are spot on simple but very moving kudos love it hugs Shadow

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/13/2024 4:21:00 AM

thank you, Shadow...sometimes simplicity and brevity are best. Thanks for recognizing that. Have a splendid day...again, glad to see you back at PS, hugs, Sara