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Spring

Spring morn's glistening dew
Seems a love affair
As it coats the rose
Dances upon grass
Evaporates too

Throaty song birds
Those lovers flirt
Then feed their young
Spring's miracles 

Earth's springtime
Arousing
Dawn~earth's yawn

Dusk rests
Creatures

Small
 

Finis'

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Howard Kerr

July 11, 2026 at 6:03 AM

The scene capture and descriptions are sublime, Sara. This poem deserves multiple trophies abd high placements. Many thanks for congratulating me on Triolet success. Howard

Sara Kendrick

July 11, 2026 at 8:07 AM

Howard, I don't know how I missed doing the congrats on your poem earlier. I appreciate this visit and kind review of my poem. I had forgotten that I wrote it. Sara K.

Jack Horne

June 6, 2019 at 3:26 PM

lovely sweet write

Michelle Faulkner

May 20, 2019 at 4:31 PM

This is such a graceful song to spring, elegant and deft-

Sara Kendrick

May 23, 2019 at 2:28 PM

Michelle, Your stopping by is encouraging. Sara

Besma Riabi Dziri

April 15, 2019 at 1:46 AM

As beautiful and reviving as spring! Inspiring work of art and nature.. enjoyed reading. My deepest regards and blessings.

Sara Kendrick

April 15, 2019 at 5:37 PM

Besma, Thanks for the visit to my page and taking time to comment. Your visits are uplifting. Sara

Janice Canerdy

April 14, 2019 at 7:30 PM

Very lovely and descriptive, Sara! Janice

Sara Kendrick

April 15, 2019 at 5:36 PM

Janice, Thanks for the visit to my page and taking time to comment. Your visits are uplifting. Sara

Nette Onclaud

April 12, 2019 at 4:45 PM

fathomless is your nature's well, and now spring is depicted through birdsongs... adorable, sara...huggs

Sara Kendrick

April 13, 2019 at 9:32 AM

Nette, Thanks for your visit and kind review of my work. I appreciate you stopping by. I got up earlier this morning and opened the door to the sound of whip-poor-wills. It sounded like huge choir off in the distance. Sara

CayCay Godwin

April 12, 2019 at 12:01 PM

This is lovely, Sara, truly, but I thought one had to decrease from 5 syllables to 4 to 3 to 2 to 1??? I'm often wrong and don't mind being wrong. Again, your imagery is lovely and I wish you all the best in the contest, and all else. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

CayCay Godwin

April 12, 2019 at 12:50 PM

Oh, you want I should erase my first comments? I feel I messed up your page, jumped the gun and commented too soon. I didn't know, Sara, but I regret commenting if it feels like I tainted the poems page! It is lovely, the finished version worth waiting to read. Let me know if you wish me to do anything, reprimand myself, maybe? Delete myself?

Sara Kendrick

April 12, 2019 at 12:42 PM

CayCay, Thanks for dropping by with comments. I appreciate your input. I was still pondering the finish of it so now it is complete(at least I hope so)..Sara

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