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Spring morn's glistening dew Seems a love affair As it coats the rose Dances upon grass Evaporates too Throaty song birds Those lovers flirt Then feed their young Spring's miracles Earth's springtime Arousing Dawn~earth's yawn Dusk rests Creatures Small Finis'

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/6/2019 3:26:00 PM

lovely sweet write

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/20/2019 4:31:00 PM

This is such a graceful song to spring, elegant and deft-

Sara Kendrick
Date: 5/23/2019 2:28:00 PM

Michelle, Your stopping by is encouraging. Sara

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 4/15/2019 1:46:00 AM

As beautiful and reviving as spring! Inspiring work of art and nature.. enjoyed reading. My deepest regards and blessings.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2019 5:37:00 PM

Besma, Thanks for the visit to my page and taking time to comment. Your visits are uplifting. Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/14/2019 7:30:00 PM

Very lovely and descriptive, Sara! Janice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/15/2019 5:36:00 PM

Janice, Thanks for the visit to my page and taking time to comment. Your visits are uplifting. Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/12/2019 4:45:00 PM

fathomless is your nature's well, and now spring is depicted through birdsongs... adorable, sara...huggs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/13/2019 9:32:00 AM

Nette, Thanks for your visit and kind review of my work. I appreciate you stopping by. I got up earlier this morning and opened the door to the sound of whip-poor-wills. It sounded like huge choir off in the distance. Sara

CayCay Jennings

Date: 4/12/2019 12:01:00 PM

This is lovely, Sara, truly, but I thought one had to decrease from 5 syllables to 4 to 3 to 2 to 1??? I'm often wrong and don't mind being wrong. Again, your imagery is lovely and I wish you all the best in the contest, and all else. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/12/2019 12:50:00 PM

Oh, you want I should erase my first comments? I feel I messed up your page, jumped the gun and commented too soon. I didn't know, Sara, but I regret commenting if it feels like I tainted the poems page! It is lovely, the finished version worth waiting to read. Let me know if you wish me to do anything, reprimand myself, maybe? Delete myself?

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/12/2019 12:42:00 PM

CayCay, Thanks for dropping by with comments. I appreciate your input. I was still pondering the finish of it so now it is complete(at least I hope so)..Sara