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Walking from the field, snow heavy on my boots, the sound of water whispers beneath the thawing blanket so tenaciously clinging to fertile mother earth. Ancient furrows of past season's hope plow through frozen dirt, the veins that now flow gently with blood of red clay and dark soil. Patches of green I see, formed from lost seeds, sown by invisible hands as winds reaped life from last evening's sowing, before mother pulled her white sheet tight over hilly breast to sleep through winter's dream. Green like season's beard to be shaved before new seed can be planted. The gate swings easily as I push it, the snow has melted here. Looking back the awakened ground shimmers like tomorrow in the morning sun. Yet, there before me the rutted path filled with frozen boot prints from years of fading memories reminds me from where I have come. 04/22/2018

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Date: 2/21/2022 3:23:00 PM
Hello James ... this sure is one heck of a poem. Your writing leaves the pictures in my mind - thank you James - Lindsay
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James Inman
Date: 2/23/2022 6:23:00 PM
Thank you again Lindsay.
Date: 6/14/2018 1:53:00 PM
P.S. Hi James. I came back to read this beautiful poem again and just to let you know I FAVED it. It is really outstanding.
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James Inman
Date: 6/14/2018 2:59:00 PM
Hi Carole, thank you so much for the kind comment. I'm happy you enjoyed it. I just realized there is no response to your comment below, please forgive me. I thought I had responded to everyone.
Date: 5/28/2018 8:33:00 AM
Mysterious and wonderful
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James Inman
Date: 5/29/2018 6:51:00 AM
Thanks JW.
Date: 5/22/2018 6:40:00 AM
Oh Congratulations are in order again James. The man is on a roll. Bravo on this excellent poem.....Maria hugs
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James Inman
Date: 5/22/2018 6:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Maria.
Date: 5/16/2018 2:03:00 PM
Beautiful, beautiful, 1st place winner! Congratulations for a well-deserved placement! Hugs. Pandita
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/17/2018 1:24:00 PM
:-):-):-)
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James Inman
Date: 5/16/2018 2:13:00 PM
Hi again, ; ) Two visits? Wow, we must stop meeting like this. People will start talking. Thank you again.
Date: 5/4/2018 9:27:00 PM
Evidently you won a contest with this poem and I can see why...it is so poignant and so easily imagined and felt.
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Date: 5/4/2018 5:19:00 AM
Congratulations James: A fine winning poem, isn’t it nice that Mother Nature always comes through. Best, SuZ
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James Inman
Date: 5/4/2018 9:59:00 AM
Thank you Suzanne, as temperamental as she can be, she always comes through.
Date: 5/1/2018 4:20:00 PM
I walked with you, all the way! Congratulations on your 1st place James. Mick
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James Inman
Date: 5/3/2018 8:05:00 AM
Thanks for the nice comment Mick.
Date: 4/30/2018 10:25:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats on your gold medal win.
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James Inman
Date: 4/30/2018 10:34:00 PM
How sweet of you, thank you Line.
Date: 4/30/2018 10:50:00 AM
A winner of a poem James, I have enjoyed the re-read, have a great day
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James Inman
Date: 4/30/2018 3:03:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 4/30/2018 8:51:00 AM
I like this-- it reminds me of the naturalistic tone that Frost achieved. Congrats on your win, James
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James Inman
Date: 4/30/2018 9:15:00 AM
Thank you for your nice comment L.J.
Date: 4/30/2018 6:24:00 AM
Wonderful poetry, James, just love the sentiment, you write it so well.
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James Inman
Date: 4/30/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thank you harry, you're very kind.
Date: 4/30/2018 4:43:00 AM
Free verse at its finest. Many congrats on your first place win, James. Sincerely, Elaine
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James Inman
Date: 4/30/2018 7:20:00 AM
Elaine, nice of you to stop by, thank you for your nice comment.
Date: 4/29/2018 10:04:00 PM
Excellent interpretation of Springtime, with such a personal and unique perspective! Congrats on your top win, James! :)
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James Inman
Date: 4/30/2018 7:18:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely words Laura.
Date: 4/29/2018 8:47:00 PM
Excellent excellence, James. The imagery is so real it's palpable. The swinging gate is as easy to feel as is the rutted path. This reader became one with the read. Kudos, and congrats on a richly deserved win! :) gw
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James Inman
Date: 4/29/2018 9:13:00 PM
Thanks for such a kind comment Gershon.
Date: 4/29/2018 6:29:00 PM
Frost reincarnate, spellbinding piece James. Beautifully done. Congratulations on your well earned top prize :) xomo!
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/29/2018 9:07:00 PM
Ok, you were channeling ;) but seriously, you captured his way with words from my impressions of Frost.
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James Inman
Date: 4/29/2018 6:34:00 PM
Much too high of a compliment but thank you Maureen.
Date: 4/29/2018 6:21:00 PM
I KNEW this would score high! Congrats ,my friend.
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James Inman
Date: 4/29/2018 6:33:00 PM
Yours was beautiful as well Andrea, thank you.
Date: 4/29/2018 4:55:00 PM
congratulations on your win with a beautifully written poem
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James Inman
Date: 4/29/2018 6:33:00 PM
Thanks Frederic.
Date: 4/29/2018 4:12:00 PM
Amazing imagery and tribute to the rebirth of Spring, James. Congratulations on your 1st Place win! Sandra :)
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James Inman
Date: 4/29/2018 6:32:00 PM
Sandra you are very kind, thank you.
Date: 4/29/2018 3:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win! A beautiful poem of spring. Enjoyed the imagery and theme. Well done. :)
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James Inman
Date: 4/29/2018 6:32:00 PM
Thank you Susan.
Date: 4/29/2018 3:11:00 PM
vibrant melody, james!...big congrats on your fine award!...huggs
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James Inman
Date: 4/29/2018 6:27:00 PM
Hi Nette, thank you.
Date: 4/29/2018 1:41:00 PM
James, your poem brought so many emotions flooding back to me---this is truly what rebirth and the season is about!
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James Inman
Date: 4/29/2018 6:27:00 PM
Thank you Craig, your contest truly inspired me when I saw it. Thank you for hosting it.
Date: 4/29/2018 1:28:00 PM
This wonderful description is as if one is there, feeling the crunch of snow underfoot. Well done! Congrats on your top honors!
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James Inman
Date: 4/29/2018 6:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Carrie.
Date: 4/29/2018 2:56:00 AM
Excellent, James, almost had to go fetch a scarf. . Regards, Viv
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James Inman
Date: 4/29/2018 7:22:00 AM
Hi Viv, Spring is headed our way, actually, where I live spring started in February and lasts almost til June. We're well into watermelon season here. Thanks.
Date: 4/28/2018 6:47:00 PM
The imagery in this story of yours James is pure magic. Love the whole poem, especially "Green like season's beard to be shaved before new seed can be planted...". This poem is close to perfect. I was off the page, transported into the poem. Thank you for sharing. L
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James Inman
Date: 4/28/2018 10:00:00 PM
Thank you for reading it Leanne. I've truly enjoyed your visits and wonderful comments. Enjoy your weekend and thank you again.
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