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welcome new spring and the rain birds that sing vines that chain flower blooms a blue sky air perfumes and clouds up high and the birds fluttering a wing a wild woodland terrain sweet butterflies that cling a running horses mane wildflowers around tombs wind like a babies cry a buzzing bee that zooms and sunsets that with beauty sigh ________________ August 24, 2022 Poetry/New-ku/Haiku/spring - NK Copyright Protected, ID 08-1483-150-24 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest Charlie New-Ku sponsor, Charlies Messina, Judged 10/18/2022 First Place

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/20/2022 6:23:00 AM

Back with congratulations. Way to go. I knew it was a winner. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 10/20/2022 3:46:00 PM

Sara, thank you so much for for the congratulations and comment, blessings

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/19/2022 1:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 10/19/2022 4:31:00 PM

Linda, thank you so much for the congratulations, blessings

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/19/2022 2:37:00 AM

Rains, birds, vines, blooms - very beautiful writing on spring. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 10/19/2022 4:31:00 PM

Christuraj, thanks so much for the compliment and congratulaitons, blessings

Charles Messina

Date: 10/18/2022 2:54:00 PM

This is So beautifully written, Constance. Great imagery! Congratulations on your 1st place win! ~Charlie

Constance La France
Date: 10/19/2022 4:32:00 PM

Charlie, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and my great placement. And for the compliment ad congratulations, appreciate, blessings

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/26/2022 1:02:00 PM

Ahh!! Reads like a great contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I am glad that I chose it to read today. Thanks for dropping by my blog. They found he has a magnesium deficiency and have started him on it in a drip. I heard from him about an hour ago and he said he was not doing so good. I hope the drip soon makes a difference. Sara

Constance La France
Date: 8/26/2022 2:44:00 PM

Sara, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, so sorry your son is so sick and praying for his recovery ~