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Stone Soup is a European folk story in which hungry strangers convince the people of a town to each share a small amount of their food in order to make a meal that everyone enjoys and exists as a moral regarding the value of sharing. In varying traditions, the stone has been replaced with other common inedible objects, and therefore the fable is also known as axe soup, button soup, nail soup, and wood soup. (Source: Wikipedia.com)

 

Recently, the weather turned chilly and rainy creating a desire for cornbread and homemade soup. Thinking of re-creating my mother’s traditional autumn soup brought to mind the story of “Stone Soup” and inspired me to write this poem. Never the same, each soup composed of bits and pieces that make the whole. You think of the story of stone soup, where each neighbor adds something to the stranger’s stone boiling in a huge pot till there’s a rich broth that all can share– Soup is community and comfort. It’s what you make when you have nothing, and what you cook when you have more. It soothes on an autumn night or when you have the flu. You remember your mother and the fragrant steam rising to your runny nose, tears, and grateful stomach. You think that generations fill each bowl with borscht or matzo balls--soup made with your own twist, say of lentils and spices. Beets sometimes dance with peppers, cinnamon, cumin, and tomatoes– All cargo carried by migrations and wars, time captured in a kettle. You taste history with every spoonful— sweet, sour, bitter, salty, like primordial soup giving life. It’s the soup of your ancestors and you sustain it.

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Date: 10/17/2023 5:56:00 AM
A fantastic poem my friend. Each bite takes me back to my childhood.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/17/2023 7:59:00 AM
thanks for visiting my site today. I'm grateful that my poem took you back to your childhood. Soup is cooking here today. smiles, Sara
Date: 10/16/2023 7:03:00 PM
Dear Sara, your poem is truly magnificent. During the enchanting season of autumn, there is nothing quite as comforting and heartwarming as a steaming bowl of hot soup, filling the air with its tantalizing aroma and bringing solace to both body and soul.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/17/2023 8:00:00 AM
thanks for stopping by, Sotto. I appreciate your visit and your comments. You're right, nothing more soothing than soup (or homemade chile) to bring warmth to our souls in autumn. Have a pleasant day, Sara
Date: 10/16/2023 3:59:00 PM
Truly a wonderful poem Sara thank you. It reminds me of my Nonna's Dishwater Soup: before washing the plates take all the scraps and bits and add them to some boiling water for the stock of the next soup
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/16/2023 4:37:00 PM
thanks for stopping by, Jeff. I hadn't heard of Dishwater soup. Sounds tasty. Enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 10/16/2023 2:46:00 PM
"It’s what you make when you have nothing, and what you cook when you have more. It soothes on an autumn night or when you have the flu." Love it, Sara, soup and this poem. We were not wealthy growing up, but if you put another pound of pasta in the pot, there was always enough for unexpected company. Just the way people were back then. Drop in drop out, mio casa tua casa. Informal. "You taste history with every spoonful— sweet, sour, bitter, salty, like primordial soup giving life. It’s the soup of your ancestors and you sustain it." Great write. A FAV!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/16/2023 4:39:00 PM
Thanks, Joe, for stopping by. We weren't wealthy either. My mother used pasta in soup also. She also added corn to just about anything. We ate a lot of soup and beans growing up..When someone visited unexpectedly, seems as if we always had 'enough.' I appreciate your accolades about my poem and for faving it. I'm honored. Thank you! enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 10/16/2023 2:37:00 PM
in autumn, hot soup very appreciated not case in summer
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/16/2023 4:40:00 PM
I agree...hot soup in autumn and winter but not so much so in the summer. thanks for stopping by, Abdullah. Enjoy your autumn evening, Sara

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