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Splitting Hares

Two rabbits will always make haste
One minute is too long to waste
Each split-second counts
So he quickly mounts
The chaste are chased by the two-faced

Copyright © Rico Leffanta | Year Posted 2022

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Connie Marcum Wong

February 24, 2022 at 7:08 AM

Your Limericks are always spot on for clever wit and fun Rico. Did you enter that Limerick contest? Aloha xxoo

February 24, 2022 at 10:10 AM

No, I never enter contests as I write only to give people a laugh, or to re-think about something. Thank you for readng a commenting! Aloha!

Michelle Faulkner

February 18, 2022 at 8:40 AM

Your word play is sharp as ever here, Rico, especially that last line, so wickedly good!

February 18, 2022 at 10:10 AM

Mahalo nui loa, Michelle! Aloha!

Caren Krutsinger

February 17, 2022 at 1:50 PM

Your limericks never disappoint

February 18, 2022 at 10:11 AM

Thank you, Caren! Aloha!

February 17, 2022 at 3:11 AM

Hello Rico - This is all in the spirit of fun and smiles. Your theme is adorable. Well done with the execution of the spirit of the limerick. Thank you for sharing. Keep enjoying poetrysoup.

February 18, 2022 at 10:12 AM

Thank you, Lisa! Aloha!

February 16, 2022 at 11:30 AM

Love on the hop eh? Like there aren’t rabbits in the world. ;-) Terry

February 18, 2022 at 10:11 AM

Check out your local warren for further action . . .Aloha!

February 16, 2022 at 7:48 AM

Bravo! Love the twist at the end, Rico. Your Limerick juices are flowing. Write On! Bill

February 18, 2022 at 10:12 AM

Thank you, Bill! Aloha!

February 15, 2022 at 7:39 PM

I always love the pun in your titles ! Rabbits are so quick, that's why they enter into race with tortoise :)

February 18, 2022 at 10:13 AM

They don't waste a second when it comes to fun! Aloha!

Mystic Rose Rose

February 15, 2022 at 3:39 PM

Lickety split, your quick with the jokes, :)

February 18, 2022 at 10:13 AM

No where near as fast as an hare! Aloha!

February 15, 2022 at 2:50 PM

love it, rico, especially "the chaste are chased..."

February 18, 2022 at 10:14 AM

I am sure you have seen that yourself! Aloha!

February 15, 2022 at 1:50 PM

Very clever penning Rico!

February 18, 2022 at 10:14 AM

Thank you! Aloha!

February 15, 2022 at 11:57 AM

I have lots of rabbits... this one made me smile, but you always do that..

February 18, 2022 at 10:15 AM

Thank you, but imagine all that rabbit food going to waste in the dumpster behind your grocery store . . .

February 15, 2022 at 10:43 AM

Them bunnies don't waste anytime, even quicker at the playboy mansion lol. Tom

February 16, 2022 at 11:21 AM

I represent that remark! :-) Terry

February 15, 2022 at 10:52 AM

or Terry Flood's neighbourhood @50p per pop! Aloha!

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