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Spirits Floating Free

I think of spirits floating free, The cares of life all left behind, With long lost loved ones there to see, No tears to cry, just peace of mind. For Carolyn's Perceptions of Heaven contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/6/2012 12:17:00 PM

When I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional Jack. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/14/2012 8:51:00 PM

Ok now...you have verse 1 of your sonnet!!! get to work! pump it up to 10 syllables a line..write me a sonnet [yup I'm nagging!] Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2012 7:25:00 AM

hmmm, wasn't I here before? Maybe I was just reading them and not commenting? anyway, this was a GREAT write, Jack, and I am pleased to see you on the winners' list.

Date: 3/28/2012 4:35:00 PM

Hi Jack congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest well done my friend. Love Alexa

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/27/2012 5:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Carolyn's contest Jack. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/26/2012 7:41:00 PM

congrats Jack on a dynamic win for this lovely depiction of the great beyond luv.. praying for u for end of month ..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/26/2012 5:32:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/26/2012 3:42:00 PM

Yes peace! Congrad's on your winning write! Light & Love

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/26/2012 2:54:00 PM

Beautiful entry and wonderful win. Congratulations, Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/26/2012 1:53:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Jack. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2012 12:38:00 PM

Jack, I really enjoyed the peaceful free-floating spirits and I do believe we shall find peace of mind on the other side. Congrats on your win! Love, Carolyn

M.I.A .

Date: 3/25/2012 8:06:00 PM

yes, just peace of mind, jack. good luck on the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/25/2012 10:17:00 AM

hey Jack. I am home from hospital and enjoying my pets and new computer program which types as I speak.. oh my new toy..luv..good luck next week.. for your surgery too..

Kash Poet

Date: 3/25/2012 7:36:00 AM

Very nice jack!Best wishes.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/24/2012 9:56:00 PM

Floating freely in peace, a beautiful way to describe Heaven. Blessings, Rhonda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2012 5:45:00 PM

Beautiful and touching written Jack.- Luck to you in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/24/2012 1:34:00 PM

you marked it with brevity yet rich in imagery, jack!.. grreat job!.:) huggs

Date: 3/24/2012 12:43:00 PM

Jack, a lovely write on your view of heaven. All the best in Carolyn's contest my friend. Love Alexa

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/24/2012 10:35:00 AM

thank you for kind words on my wife's poem Jack and she is able to read with me tonite and has enjoyed your words for the new competition. wishing you great success for a win. Ron.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/24/2012 9:29:00 AM

This is such a beautiful image of heaven-- I think your last line sums it up perfectly-- I hope all is doing great with you, Jack :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/24/2012 9:02:00 AM

And well on to you...Great interpertation of heaven...Enjoyed reading this morn..Glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Christopher Bunton

Date: 3/24/2012 8:06:00 AM

Very Good!