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spirit voice I hear while I lie despairing there after losing mom She came to me in the dead of night Spoke of the bitterness of my plight Gave me peace within, Starting fresh again My mother restored my inner sight. A spiritual visitor may come to you ~~ if you will believe
SECOND PLACE WINNER Written January 28, 2022 Especially for “Charlie Hi-Lim-Ku” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina

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Date: 3/16/2022 7:07:00 PM
Sorry it took so long commenting on this wonderful write, Milton. Funny, I just read this as my late brother minutes ago came to me in my thoughts (Gave me the chills after reading this) Anyway, Congratulations on your win in my contest. Stay well dear friend. ~CM
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/16/2022 7:16:00 PM
Oh, I am so glad you had this experience, Charlie. Thanks so much for sharing it with me in the context of this poem. I've had so many experiences with this happening to people who have shared with me. Again, thanks!
Date: 3/13/2022 4:19:00 AM
I have read your winning work and was delighted that it is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congrats. Sara..Sometimes that is true. I am having dreams from time to time of my deceased relatives even those kin by marriage and it seems as if they are right there when I dream.
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Date: 3/13/2022 10:20:00 AM
There is every possibility, as I see it, that they are, Sara. Dreams are amazingly powerful and meaningful.
Date: 3/11/2022 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. A voice of peace what delight. Love it. Have a blessed day/weekend..........
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Date: 3/11/2022 12:41:00 PM
Thanks, Paula. It's always good to read your comments, hearing from you in general.
Date: 3/11/2022 7:51:00 AM
I too am a believer, very nice that you found peace. Your three, a perfect blending. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/11/2022 9:31:00 AM
Thanks so much for your warm and thoughtful comment, I Am Anaya. I really appreciate you.
Date: 3/11/2022 4:53:00 AM
Great experience in vision. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/11/2022 9:31:00 AM
Thank you, Chris, for your affirmation.
Date: 1/30/2022 1:59:00 AM
I have had so many experiences with my loved ones beyond the veil, and so has Joe. It is amazing, but when he gets into a fix he asks his Dad for advice, and his Dad always comes through with an answer. That man has "supposedly been gone" since Oct 1, 1984.
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Date: 1/30/2022 8:48:00 AM
I understand and believe it completely, Caren. Many people miss out of some really fine experiences in life because they do not listen to the spirits of those who have loved them the most.
Date: 1/29/2022 8:30:00 AM
Nice Monoku, Milt, great thoughts. Your friend in Texas, Bill
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/29/2022 8:44:00 AM
Thank you, Bill.
Date: 1/29/2022 6:29:00 AM
And I do believe Milt! A great entry for Charlie's contest! Good Luck and a Happy Weekend!!!
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Date: 1/29/2022 8:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mike. I appreciated your kind thoughts.

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