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HD wallpaper: black and gray metal frame, Pan, sailing ship, Jolly ...

How blessed was I to find you twined the foam Among the shells and spindrift you called home Sweet-spinning tales of sails and seas of suns To wrap me tight with myst'ry 'midst the gloam You bound great ships for trips across the sky Broad sails made light with angels' wings to fly A darkened sea of night and maelstroms, bold And deep as any dreams that might steer nigh You wound me stories fraught with ire, askance Great battles waged for distant shores to dance And with your grand penchant for lovers' duels Each ending dripped with honey-sweet romance You are the bright that did, with night, conspire With Luna's beautied madness, feign to buy her One starry necklace placed to grace the heavens Then twirled with Mars to set those stars afire Soft-shined within your eyes, a moon and sea That whispered to my heart what love could be All strung like precious pearls to trim your lips *Celestial musings that you said ... to me. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Brian's Choice A, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Poetic Lines From A Poetry Soup Poet - Vijay Pandit" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Judge & Sponsor. * From the poem "A Man From Distant Lands" by Vijay Pandit - Copyright © January 4, 2018 *

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Date: 5/13/2020 6:46:00 PM
Greg, excellent, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _Constance
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Date: 5/3/2020 6:36:00 AM
I like the form you tried here and very different take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 5/3/2020 8:01:00 PM
Thank you very kindly for my placement - I worked very hard on this one.
Date: 4/25/2020 9:25:00 PM
Wonderful write G, I remember that pic from 2 other poems (I believe) great work as per usual with you. Gives me a reason to read again!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/25/2020 11:31:00 PM
At LEAST two, lol, probably more ... it's also on the wall of my studio's control room - it's from Peter Pan, the live-action version by Universal (2003) - one of my favorite movies. Many thanks, John.
Date: 4/25/2020 10:34:00 AM
Wonderful write Gregory..Soft-shined within your eyes, a moon and sea..Mesmerizing poetic verse.. Good luck in the contest..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/25/2020 11:26:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Jenish, I so greatly appreciate you taking the time to read and comment, my friend - blessings! :o)

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