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Spin N Win Fire in the hole. The bills are not paid. Things are out of control. The horse broke his leg, but they did not put him down… I would not let them. This no longer matters, how far across the desert is the oasis from here? This… All of this, no longer makes any difference, to anyone that was, or is to come this way. Leave your money home. Leave your wife and your dog. Don’t go if you can stop yourself from getting in the car. If not, be ready to win… As all that you feel has worth, will be lost.

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Date: 11/7/2019 8:39:00 PM
Intriguing write, my friend! ~ Lost Wages
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Ann Foster
Date: 11/7/2019 9:03:00 PM
lost hopes... Thank you friend for stopping by. Always glad to see you. Have the very nicest night. Ann
Date: 11/6/2019 2:54:00 PM
Such is life and we need our down time. Well penned.
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Date: 11/6/2019 3:11:00 PM
A busy and crazy one to be sure. Have a wonderful day. Ann
Date: 11/6/2019 2:09:00 PM
This has ominous overtones, feels like a dark prophecy, or gypsy curse...
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Date: 11/6/2019 3:10:00 PM
hehe... curse... :) Ty for stopping by... have the very nicest day. Ann

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