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Spectacular

Spacious, glistening as far as straining sight can wander, Playful waves reflect the light in joyous, rippling prance, Effervescing the myriad, resplendent sherbet-sky Colors in flashing pirouettes, a ballerina dance. Tides wash in and, weeping, withdraw from sentinel shores, Aching, yearning for each returning, salt-cleansing spray, Cresting upon warm sweeps of widely welcoming sand, Undulating sound like the rosaries lonely nuns pray. Layers of foaming laughter dissolve, then mount in raucous cries, Arcing across the mighty oceans of this planet, Rustling, swaying branches or mighty, charging samurais. Copyright, January 13, 2016 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 5/16/2016 10:04:00 AM
Salute to your pen and a well done to the mind out of which this sea of wisdom emanated. A definite 7
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Date: 1/30/2016 1:38:00 AM
Faye, Congratulations on your wonderful win. X0X.... LINDA
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Date: 1/22/2016 1:38:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this spectacular write Faye..
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Date: 1/22/2016 12:34:00 AM
Lovely piece, Faye, terrific imagery. Well done! Viv x
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Date: 1/21/2016 2:09:00 PM
Well done, Faye...congratulations.
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Date: 1/21/2016 12:45:00 PM
Faye, Congratulations on your Spectacular Acrostic winning poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 1/21/2016 8:42:00 AM
Just wonderful Faye congrats on nice 3rd place win!
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Date: 1/14/2016 2:40:00 AM
Beautifully written acrostic on this truly spectacular sight...love the "Layers of foaming laughter dissolve, then mount in raucous cries." Love this, Faye. 7. Kim
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Date: 1/14/2016 1:19:00 AM
Truly spectacular Faye.. sure will fly high.. best wishes!
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