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Stock-still in gold dawn light while many sleep, perched, scanning, on abandoned termite heap. Expectant, skin tingles as in cold breeze contrasting with the stillness of the trees. The tracking beeper focuses our minds as aerial picks target from behind. Cheetah ten yards away now caught off guard upwind of us, head cocked and staring hard. Long looks exchanged,unspoken things are passed and finally, spell broken, goes at last. Reeling, those breathless minutes went so fast. A memory of my time in Namibia, 2009, and the above photo was taken by me. We nicknamed him 'Blackeye'. No fence between us. Awesome. 13th January 2016 For contest 'Spectacular Acrostic', by John Hamilton

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/30/2016 11:55:00 PM

Viv,, you are so kind, thank you for the nice reply to my comment. Keep writing and sharing your poetry. XoX LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/30/2016 1:37:00 AM

Viv,, Congratulations on your wonderful win. X0X.... LINDA

Viv Wigley
Date: 1/30/2016 2:08:00 AM

Many thanks, Linda, and I'm liking your new photo, too. Viv x

Faye Gibson

Date: 1/24/2016 4:21:00 PM

Viv, I loved this the first time I read it and it hasn't lost any of its beauty. Congratulations.

Viv Wigley
Date: 1/25/2016 12:50:00 AM

Thanks Faye, I'll get back there one day. Viv x

Balveen Cheema

Date: 1/23/2016 7:39:00 PM

What an amazing experience, Viv! Congrats on your well deserved placement!

Viv Wigley
Date: 1/25/2016 12:50:00 AM

Cheers, Balveen, I would recommend it to anyone at least once in there lifetime. Regards, Viv

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/22/2016 1:32:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this spectacular write Viv.

Viv Wigley
Date: 1/25/2016 12:51:00 AM

Thanks, Dr Upma, I always appreciate your visit, Viv x

Skat A

Date: 1/21/2016 12:44:00 PM

Viv, Congratulations on your Spectacular Acrostic winning poem. Hugs **SKAT**

Viv Wigley
Date: 1/22/2016 12:21:00 AM

Thanks, Skat, Viv x

Rob Carmack

Date: 1/21/2016 10:14:00 AM

Congrats Viv on your placement. That had to be rush, being so close with no barrier.

Viv Wigley
Date: 1/22/2016 12:21:00 AM

No fear, Rob, since Cheeteahs don't regard us as prey. The Masai in kenya regularly walk within yards of them. Still a bizarre experience, after many years of going to Zoos and having wire and walls separating one. Regards, Viv

Lin Lane

Date: 1/21/2016 8:57:00 AM

You know I really liked this one from my comments when you first posted. I'm glad it made it as a winner, Viv. Congrats.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/22/2016 4:04:00 AM

Thank you, sir, for your sweetness...wink

Viv Wigley
Date: 1/22/2016 12:19:00 AM

Apart from being sweet, cute and pretty, you also have impeccable taste, Lin. many thanks, Viv x

John Hamilton

Date: 1/21/2016 8:29:00 AM

Nice entry Viv congrats on your 3rd place win!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/18/2016 3:47:00 AM

Oh Viv, I want this poem to get first place. I love it and the picture is truly awesome. I would love to see one of these lovely creatures in the wild. #7

Viv Wigley
Date: 1/20/2016 12:50:00 AM

Connie, if I ever get enough cash together, I'd gladly take you over to AfriCat myself. Thanks for dropping by, Viv x

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/17/2016 12:26:00 PM

Quite a cat encounter. Thank-you for sharing. Here, we still have quite a few people trapping bobcats for the fur--though I can't understand doing that to such beautiful animals. There may be a reason to hunt them that I am not aware of since I do understand that, but aren't there too many of us?

Viv Wigley
Date: 1/20/2016 12:50:00 AM

I know, Duke, why can't we just all leave well alone? Thanks for dropping by. regards, Viv

Legendary Legend

Date: 1/17/2016 6:56:00 AM

excellent piece of art....well done dear.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/14/2016 1:04:00 PM

Brilliant Viv! One would never know that this is an ACROSTIC, it's so spendidly written with gorgeous imagery and flow. BRAVO!! Best wishes, Keith

Viv Wigley
Date: 1/14/2016 5:04:00 PM

Thanks, Keith, but whoah, if you had been there....... regards, Viv

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/14/2016 1:28:00 AM

Ah, this is indeed a spectacular moment... I feel the tension! This is an awesome experience, Viv. Great way to record such experience. A winner. Another 7.

Viv Wigley
Date: 1/14/2016 2:17:00 AM

As a first encounter, this was special since it wasn't a fleeting glimpse but a face-off, for maybe three minutes, but you're so busy taking it in, it seems over in a flash. Got a picture, though. Viv x

Elaine George

Date: 1/13/2016 10:45:00 AM

Spectacular Photo and spectacular Acrostic. Number one in my books.

Viv Wigley
Date: 1/14/2016 12:27:00 AM

Thanks, Elaine, very kind. Thanks for dropping by. Viv x

Lin Lane

Date: 1/13/2016 7:18:00 AM

A fascinating encounter, Viv. This line..."Long looks exchanged, unspoken things are passed," is the one that I most like. I've often wondered what animals are thinking when we look into each other's eyes. Great write.

Lin Lane
Date: 1/13/2016 7:28:00 AM

semi-tame - a wild animal? I agree with you. I stared into the eyes of a silverback at my zoo (the habitat was beautiful and large). He stared back for the longest time, and I wondered what he was thinking about me. I felt respect for him, so I turned away first.

Viv Wigley
Date: 1/13/2016 7:22:00 AM

Thanks, Lin. I remember a bush guide telling us, on a similar encounter with a Leopard later in the day, that our look at it was of admiration and awe, and the leopard was simply figuring out the best way to kill us. Good job it was semi-tame. hang on, there's no such thing...aaaargh! Viv x