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Sparkle

Some days I gleam and sparkle like stars above I glisten and shine like moonlight glowing on water but sometimes I am just a little sparkle flicker and have lost my twinkle, my dazzle, my energy, ... and my spirit is but a blink ______________________ April 2, 2021 Poetry/Fibonacci Modified/Sparkle Copyright Protected, ID 04-1343-428-02 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All Yours (Apr 4) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 04/03/2021 First Place

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/5/2021 6:14:00 AM

A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Constance. Janice

Constance La France
Date: 4/5/2021 12:29:00 PM

Janice, thanks for the congrats and compliment, I love this poem, love _Constance

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/3/2021 10:24:00 PM

I picture you "glistening and shining" and I smile.

Constance La France
Date: 4/4/2021 10:10:00 AM

Caren, thank you for that lovely comment, appreciate, love _Constance

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/3/2021 9:46:00 AM

Exactly how I feel. You've captured my emotions well. Congrats on your win. Hugs

Constance La France
Date: 4/4/2021 10:11:00 AM

Eileen, thank you for the sweet comment and the congratulations, hugs _Constance

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/3/2021 5:23:00 AM

Poem has touched EXCELLENCE, Congrats and Hugs.

Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2021 8:30:00 AM

Anisha, thank you for the compliment and congrats, hugs _Constance

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/3/2021 4:12:00 AM

Magical...and beautiful! I love your Fib, Constance:-) Congrats on first place win!

Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2021 8:30:00 AM

Edward, thanks for the compliment and congrats, grateful _Constance

Jcb Brul

Date: 4/3/2021 12:43:00 AM

Lovely Fibonacci. This poem is a golden creation. Congratulations on your awesome top win!!

Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2021 8:31:00 AM

JCB, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations ,appreciate _Constance

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/2/2021 11:15:00 AM

Well written and also a poem that I am sure many can relate to. Well done :)

Constance La France
Date: 4/2/2021 3:45:00 PM

Heidi, thanks for the visit and the compliment, appreciate _Constance

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/2/2021 8:20:00 AM

Neato, Constance. I worked with a fibonacci yesterday, I think. It's an interesting and can be challenging form. You've done a very nice, flowing example. I loved the first person approach, but couldn't get it to work for me. You succeeded admirably!

Constance La France
Date: 4/2/2021 8:39:00 AM

Milt, thanks for the compliment on my Fibonnaci, I always have trouble getting the last 21 syllable line to fit without going over to the next line, so I modified it and split it in two lines _Constance