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Soup Compared to Poetry Soup

Summertime, summertime And homemade vegetable soup This is no place for fruity loops Only foods from the garden that rhyme Oh! Give us soup in the summertime One writes tomatoes, another squash Another corn with peppers by gosh End with dessert a pie from lime Summertime, summertime Oh! Summertime Shoestring budget on a dime Carrots, potatoes, butter beans prime Awesome soups, mighty fine Cut some okra, dream a dream Snap a few beans then just steam Cook some cornbread, make a design In that soup mixture, have some verse Maybe a sonnet, where love comes first A stormy day Haiku, and rain clouds burst Maybe a clerihew somewhat terse Maybe precise wording, in every line Just the right noun, verb, or conjunction To have it just blend in a junction On soup write, then forever to it consign
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Bartley Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 4:42 PM
All the poems written for my contest aka this website, were absolutely wonderful. In my heart, they were all winners. It was very difficult to judge especially being my first one to host. Again, thanks for entering.
Kendrick Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 3:20 AM
Thank you, Ben, for dropping by with a thank you for entering the contest. I appreciate the nice comment. Sara K
Caliri Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 2:02 PM
Solid work as ever, Sarah! Love your charming rhyme style and bouncy clever word fun. And exploratory narrative. Of course you place higher than me. You're a ringer in every contest.
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2024 at 2:30 PM
Why, thank you, Matt. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara K
Baker Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 9:45 PM
Congratulations on your fine POTD, Sara! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
Kendrick Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Haven't seen you in awhile, Bill. Thank you for the visit with congratulations ..Sara K
Anaya Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:56 PM
Back with congratulations on your POTD Sara! You are a marvelous chef & poetess ;)
Kendrick Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 7:34 AM
I appreciate the extra visit, I Am. Well, sometimes the meals are good and some not so good just like my poems. Sara K
Nicole Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 6:20 PM
Dear Sara, this is a cute and clever lyric/poem. I was singing your words, instead of reading them. In summertime, it's all about enjoying those delicious vegetables in soup that's homemade. :) So yummy ! Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. So thankful you're here at Poetry Soup. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kendrick Avatar
May 31, 2024 at 7:33 AM
Why, thank you, Brandy. I appreciate your kind review and uplifting thoughts. The nice smiley face is awesome. Sara K
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 5:59 PM
"Sir, line's for 2nds," "My err, & 3rds," "A right, then roll away." A William's getaway from his 'Empty Nest', Sara, Aloha, from The Haw'n Ham ... enjoyed, POTD'r
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:10 PM
Nice to read you my dear Sara. Many Congratulations on today's POTD. It's really deserved. Something different. A Soup of Soupers. Nice done!
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:11 PM
Maria, Your review was encouraging. I am glad I served up something that was different and liked. Sara K
Wolf Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 12:16 PM
Mmmmm. Sounds gooooooood, Sara. Are you inviting Soupers over for some of your summertime soup? Is there a 'junior discount' available? lol. Congrats on POTD! ~ Gershon
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:10 PM
Thank you, Gershon. I like soup and poetry soup is a nice place to spend a few hours. Thank you for stopping by with congratulations. Sara K
Elliott Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 9:31 AM
A big Congratulations, Sara, on this very charming POTD. Enjoy your special poetry day! In His Name, Regina. :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:09 PM
In His Name, is a good way to end your comment/s. I appreciate the touch of faith within. Sara K
Rodgers Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:59 AM
Dear Sara, I am so happy you got POTD and I had to comeback and send you a hug and a hearty congratulations my Dear Friend! - Blessings, Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:08 PM
I appreciate you going the extra mile to by coming back with congratulations, Daniel. Thanks for the blessings. Sara K
Kavanagh  Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:36 AM
Congratulations Sara on a most deserving POTD, I think you have captured the essence of PS in your Pot of Soup, very cleverly cooked up and dished out, and may I add very tasty too, cheers David
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:06 PM
Thank you, David. I appreciate the kind review and time spent here. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:08 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful Soup write again. Have A Blessed Day With Your Win Writing Away...........
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:35 AM
Thank you, Paula, for going the extra mile and leaving a congratulations. Sara K
Bowring Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:00 AM
Many congratulations dear Sara on POTD. Such an enjoyable read. I love leek and potato soup! Love the title too. ‘ In that soup mixture, have some verse, maybe a love sonnet where love comes first’ delightful! Wonderful creativity. Hope you’re having a great celebratory day. Xx
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:34 AM
Yes, it is nice to have so many nice comments. Thank you for dropping by with your kind review. Sara K
Gentile Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 6:24 AM
Sara, congratulations on your POTD honors! Stirring the soup at its best!! Enjoy your day!!
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:26 AM
Yes, we all can stir things up just a little with each poem written. Might not change the world but it might make one person feel better that day. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 6:00 AM
Wow! A powerful soup with sides and dessert! Well deserved POTD, Sara! A fave for me…as so many poems and poets are…they stir my heart and emotions, have different personalities; some serious…some funny…some loud…some silent…Just great, Sara!
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:25 AM
I am so honored that you would fav it. Yes, just like soup even if it is just vegetable each chef would have a different delicious recipe. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Kitchin Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 5:08 AM
Sara, a creative poem, congratulations on POTD.
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:24 AM
I love soup because it adds a whole different dimension to my life both poetry soup and edible soup. Thanks for the congrats. Sara K
Fowler Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 5:07 AM
Cute Sara! Very clever. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:23 AM
I can rejoice that you thought it was clever. Thanks for the high praise. Sara K
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 5:01 AM
Congratulations, Dear Sara, on POTD. This soup-poem is deliciously enjoyable!
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:20 AM
Why, thank you, Malabika. Your visit made my soup sound better. Sara K
May Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:54 AM
Congrats on POTD Sara
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 8:19 AM
Your congrats made my day..Sara K
M  Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:29 AM
POTD Congratulations Sara for your delicious soup poem!! Debx
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:43 AM
Wonderful to know you enjoyed the soup. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:13 AM
- A wonderful poem, Sara :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:42 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise for the congratulations and smiley face. Sara K
Edmonds  Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 1:38 AM
A fantastic write and tribute to PoetrySoup, very amusing indeed. Congratulations Sara on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:41 AM
I am glad you liked it, Beryl. I am delighted you stopped by. Sara K
Cunningham Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 1:03 AM
An enjoyable read Sara, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:40 AM
A surprise for sure, Tom. Thanks, Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 12:48 AM
Congrats on your POTD.
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:39 AM
Thanks, Victor. I appreciate the visit. Sara K
Jones Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 12:40 AM
Love your creative free style with workings of inner rhyme and theme of summertime veggies! A unique potd! Congratulations!
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 2:36 AM
Why, Karen, such a nice review of my work. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations. Sara K
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