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Sounds That Weep

The clouds are heavy moisture laden Dark and deep with sounds that weep, will they weep With the surf, Palms, and wind as they dampen Scene with mournful cries, sighs, and desire steep The sun can not lift their weight but lies low Behind their heaviness to see if they Cry out their sadness_over land flow From the northeast a storm approaches this day The chill of it makes room feel warm cozy Inviting, a place to feel love_glow Like beyond the long horizon I see A place of warmth and love_no storms blow Beyond the far away horizon_ wait Perfect peace, joy, abiding love's fate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/16/2012 8:26:00 PM
You let your talent shine through this one, excellent piece.
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Date: 9/16/2012 8:41:00 AM
A poem with hope pouring out in your two last verses. When life seems dull and dark then look to that which is bright and we will see the light. I love it Sara. One love. Joy Well.
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Date: 9/15/2012 8:50:00 PM
What a lovely sonnet you've penned, Sara! I've enjoyed reading it this morning. Thank you so much for stopping by and taking time to leave a wonderful comment on my work. May God bless you always and your family! :) luv, Leonora
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Date: 9/15/2012 8:05:00 PM
Looks like a good sonnet poem. Russell liked this and so do I.
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Date: 9/15/2012 8:01:00 PM
This is a well designed and awesomely pieced together write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this fantastic poem this evening! Quite the wondrous piece, Great Work!!
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