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Sunshine glitters across the water in a tireless playful motion, and a dreamy hypnotic music of eternity ripples on through my nights. I close my eyes, transported to a dock of my youth where soothing waves greet me, enticing me, inviting me, rocking me. And I abandon myself to the lullaby that could just as easily be the arms of a lover. AP: Honorable Mention 2023 Submitted on May 20, 2023 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE no 1218 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND POTD May 22, 2023

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Date: 5/25/2023 6:20:00 AM
Belated congratulations Line on the honour of POTD. Hope you're keeping well, greetings from Norway. Tom
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/28/2023 3:37:00 AM
I'm just here on holiday, beautiful country. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/26/2023 12:08:00 PM
Thank you very much, Tom. I didn't know you were from Norway !
Date: 5/25/2023 2:23:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD Line….Debx
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Date: 5/26/2023 12:08:00 PM
Thanks, Deb. Much appreciated.
Date: 5/24/2023 12:16:00 AM
Lovely poetry Line, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 5/26/2023 12:09:00 PM
Thank you very much, Belle ~
Date: 5/23/2023 1:35:00 PM
A beautiful POTD! Congratulations, Line!
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Date: 5/23/2023 8:42:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim ~
Date: 5/22/2023 10:43:00 PM
nice poet
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Date: 5/23/2023 8:42:00 PM
Thanks, Kenneth ~
Date: 5/22/2023 9:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2023 8:43:00 PM
Much appreciated, Jeanette ~
Date: 5/22/2023 8:51:00 PM
As "waves" are "rocking me, I abandon myself to the lullaby." This thought curls gently around me and my heart. Beautiful in every way. Your words caress the page with elegance and grace. Congratulations Line, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 5/22/2023 7:29:00 PM
A beautiful and dreamy experiience transporting one to the realms of fantasy. Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your POTD
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Date: 5/22/2023 8:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Valsa. Have a fabulous day!
Date: 5/22/2023 6:32:00 PM
A wonderful daydream, Line. A reverie and now a potd. Congratulations!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2023 8:38:00 PM
Thank you very much, Lin. Have a lovely day ~
Date: 5/22/2023 5:22:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Line, on receiving honour of POTD. Wonderful dreamy piece!
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Date: 5/22/2023 8:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Malabika. Most appreciated ~
Date: 5/22/2023 4:33:00 PM
Back with congratulations Line ! Such a lovely piece . Happy to see it as POTD ! Susan :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2023 8:37:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan. Have a wonderful day !
Date: 5/22/2023 2:59:00 PM
Line, congratulations on POTD~ Warren
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Date: 5/22/2023 8:37:00 PM
Thanks, Warren. Very appreciated ~
Date: 5/22/2023 12:44:00 PM
Congrats for your POTD.
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Date: 5/22/2023 8:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Victor. Most appreciated ~
Date: 5/22/2023 11:01:00 AM
Love it, Line...especially like "a dreamy hypnotic music of eternity". Congrats on POTD, and BOL in the contest.
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Date: 5/22/2023 8:37:00 PM
Thank you very much, Bill. Most appreciated.
Date: 5/22/2023 9:31:00 AM
Soothing poem of days past, Line. Congratulations on your POTD! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2023 8:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Bill.
Date: 5/22/2023 8:52:00 AM
Excellent piece, Line. Transporting! POTD 2 b sure. :o)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2023 8:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Arlo ~ have a wonderful day
Date: 5/22/2023 8:47:00 AM
Line, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor !
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2023 8:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, Constance ~ much appreciated.
Date: 5/21/2023 8:45:00 PM
One more for eternity, Poet Laureate. I love, love, love it! FAVEtime! ~ Otis Redding, just a sittin' on the dock of the bay-be.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2023 8:35:00 PM
LOL love the reference to Otis Redding's 'sittin' on the dock of the bay', bay-be. Thanks for the charming comment, Gershon.
Date: 5/21/2023 7:57:00 AM
An impressive poem, Line. Thanks for your comment on my page.
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Date: 5/22/2023 8:32:00 PM
Thanks, Sotto ~ have a great day
Date: 5/21/2023 7:23:00 AM
Wonderful Line ! I was transported with you ! Images and emotions galore . A fav ! Hugs, Susan :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2023 8:32:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan ~
Date: 5/21/2023 12:05:00 AM
A clear fav ~ thanks for sharing, Line
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/22/2023 8:32:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment ~ most appreciated.

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