Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Sounds of Eternity

Sunshine glitters across the water
in a tireless playful motion, and
a dreamy hypnotic music of eternity
ripples on through my nights.

I close my eyes, transported to a dock
of my youth where soothing waves 
greet me, enticing me, inviting me, rocking me.
And I abandon myself to the lullaby
that could just as easily be the arms of a lover.



AP: Honorable Mention 2023

POTD May 22, 2023

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Tom Cunningham May 25, 2023 at 6:20 AM Belated congratulations Line on the honour of POTD. Hope you're keeping well, greetings from Norway. Tom Tom Cunningham May 28, 2023 at 3:37 AM I'm just here on holiday, beautiful country. Tom Line Gauthier May 26, 2023 at 12:08 PM Thank you very much, Tom. I didn't know you were from Norway !

Deb M May 25, 2023 at 2:23 AM Congratulations on POTD Line….Debx Line Gauthier May 26, 2023 at 12:08 PM Thanks, Deb. Much appreciated.

Beryl Edmonds May 24, 2023 at 12:16 AM Lovely poetry Line, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle Line Gauthier May 26, 2023 at 12:09 PM Thank you very much, Belle ~

Kim Rodrigues May 23, 2023 at 1:35 PM A beautiful POTD! Congratulations, Line! Line Gauthier May 23, 2023 at 8:42 PM Thank you so much, Kim ~

Kenneth R. Jenkins May 22, 2023 at 10:43 PM nice poet Line Gauthier May 23, 2023 at 8:42 PM Thanks, Kenneth ~

Daisy Meadows May 22, 2023 at 9:35 PM Congratulations on your POTD. Well done. Line Gauthier May 23, 2023 at 8:43 PM Much appreciated, Jeanette ~

Brandy Nicole May 22, 2023 at 8:51 PM As "waves" are "rocking me, I abandon myself to the lullaby." This thought curls gently around me and my heart. Beautiful in every way. Your words caress the page with elegance and grace. Congratulations Line, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Valsa George May 22, 2023 at 7:29 PM A beautiful and dreamy experiience transporting one to the realms of fantasy. Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your POTD Line Gauthier May 22, 2023 at 8:39 PM Thank you so much, Valsa. Have a fabulous day!

Lin Lane May 22, 2023 at 6:32 PM A wonderful daydream, Line. A reverie and now a potd. Congratulations! Line Gauthier May 22, 2023 at 8:38 PM Thank you very much, Lin. Have a lovely day ~

Malabika Ray Choudhury May 22, 2023 at 5:22 PM Congratulations, Dear Line, on receiving honour of POTD. Wonderful dreamy piece! Line Gauthier May 22, 2023 at 8:38 PM Thank you so much, Malabika. Most appreciated ~

Susan Lawrence May 22, 2023 at 4:33 PM Back with congratulations Line ! Such a lovely piece . Happy to see it as POTD ! Susan :) Line Gauthier May 22, 2023 at 8:37 PM Thank you so much, Susan. Have a wonderful day !

Warren Doll May 22, 2023 at 2:59 PM Line, congratulations on POTD~ Warren Line Gauthier May 22, 2023 at 8:37 PM Thanks, Warren. Very appreciated ~

Victor Buhagiar May 22, 2023 at 12:44 PM Congrats for your POTD. Line Gauthier May 22, 2023 at 8:35 PM Thank you very much, Victor. Most appreciated ~

Jim Slaughter May 22, 2023 at 11:01 AM Love it, Line...especially like "a dreamy hypnotic music of eternity". Congrats on POTD, and BOL in the contest. Line Gauthier May 22, 2023 at 8:37 PM Thank you very much, Bill. Most appreciated.

Bill Baker May 22, 2023 at 9:31 AM Soothing poem of days past, Line. Congratulations on your POTD! A poet friend in Texas, Bill Line Gauthier May 22, 2023 at 8:36 PM Thank you so much, Bill.

Arlo Parker May 22, 2023 at 8:52 AM Excellent piece, Line. Transporting! POTD 2 b sure. :o) Line Gauthier May 22, 2023 at 8:36 PM Thank you very much, Arlo ~ have a wonderful day

Constance La France May 22, 2023 at 8:47 AM Line, a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ! Line Gauthier May 22, 2023 at 8:35 PM Thank you very much, Constance ~ much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf May 21, 2023 at 8:45 PM One more for eternity, Poet Laureate. I love, love, love it! FAVEtime! ~ Otis Redding, just a sittin' on the dock of the bay-be. Line Gauthier May 22, 2023 at 8:35 PM LOL love the reference to Otis Redding's 'sittin' on the dock of the bay', bay-be. Thanks for the charming comment, Gershon.

Sotto Poet May 21, 2023 at 7:57 AM An impressive poem, Line. Thanks for your comment on my page. Line Gauthier May 22, 2023 at 8:32 PM Thanks, Sotto ~ have a great day

Susan Lawrence May 21, 2023 at 7:23 AM Wonderful Line ! I was transported with you ! Images and emotions galore . A fav ! Hugs, Susan :) Line Gauthier May 22, 2023 at 8:32 PM Thank you so much, Susan ~

Unseeking Seeker May 21, 2023 at 12:05 AM A clear fav ~ thanks for sharing, Line Line Gauthier May 22, 2023 at 8:32 PM Thanks for the lovely comment ~ most appreciated.