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Sounds of Earth

“The sounds of Earth is the music of my soul.” Sounds of earth echo from mountains and meadows, Lauding nature's rhythms as zephyrs gently blow, Strumming soul's music burbling rivers compose, Rippling babbling waves giggling with ebb and flow; Where seasons rustle whirling autumns, and springs, Where butterflies waltz, fluttering ardent wings; While lured by birdsongs, sweet melodies I long, When stars stage symphony to nightingale’s song. August 10, 2022 Placed 1st: Let Your Muse Be Inspired – R Form Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Form: Rispetto Rhymes: ababccdd (Rhymezone) Syllables: 11 per line (howmanysyllables.com)

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/27/2024 4:42:00 PM

I found this poem. It's a beautiful tribute to the sounds we may hear. Indeed, the more carefully we look for beauty, the more likely we are to ensure its preservation.

Ink Empress

Date: 11/17/2023 8:40:00 AM

Wow this is truly a magical rispetto. I am in awe, captivating imagery throughout, the rhymes, alliterations and descriptive diction is surreal so gorgeous and mellifluous. I especially love “ Strumming soul's music burbling rivers compose, Rippling babbling waves giggling with ebb and flow“ i can almost hear this. And see butterflies waltz too! Truly magnificent. Another fave for me. Love reading u

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/23/2023 6:41:00 PM

Exquisite imagery, surrounding a beautiful theme. Belated congratulations, Vijay. :)

Constance La France

Date: 9/6/2022 11:28:00 PM

Vijay, excellent Rispetto poem beautifully penned and presented. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Let Your Muse Be Inspired, God Bless ~

Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 9/6/2022 10:50:00 PM

What a beautiful write Vijay. Congrats on your win! ~Anna Kaianah

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2022 6:53:00 AM

Congratulations on this great winner. Way to go. Sara

Michael Tor

Date: 8/20/2022 2:13:00 PM

Vijay love how you brought to life the sounds of the earth, in only a manner you could do. Really enjoyed...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/19/2022 7:44:00 AM

Rhythm and rhyme make this poem burst into a symphony, or an orchestra of the sounds of the earth, I can almost hear them as I read about them. an excellent Rispetto. Hugs and blessings, JENNIFER

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 8/18/2022 6:56:00 AM

This makes my ears sing Vijay ;) Your pen is so expressive and seemingly flows so effortlessly. I am an humble admirer. Linda

Bill Baker

Date: 8/17/2022 4:29:00 PM

I love the energy and rhythm and your eloquent imagery, Vijay. Great entry my friend. Good luck in the contest! Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/14/2022 8:43:00 AM

Ahh!! What a lovely scenic and soulful place of which you write. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2022 6:41:00 AM

Glad to hear that from you, Sara. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Silent One

Date: 8/13/2022 6:01:00 AM

Nice rhymes and flow to your poem. You wrote this one very well...Nice to see you active on here.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2022 6:41:00 AM

Glad to see you again. Much appreciate, SO. Many thanks.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/12/2022 11:05:00 AM

Your poem is Nature's symphony, in a nutshell, my dearest friend, Vijay! Be blessed!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2022 6:40:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend. Many thanks.

Valsa George

Date: 8/12/2022 5:27:00 AM

Wow... so beautiful ! Got lost in the melodious orchestra of nature! So pictureque and so euphonious...! Good luck in the contest, dear Vijay....

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2022 6:40:00 AM

Thank you Valsa--much appreciate.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/12/2022 12:01:00 AM

Nicely done... good luck on R challenge...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/15/2022 6:40:00 AM

Thank you Pashang--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/11/2022 12:54:00 PM

so sweet. And I see you chose same form I did. Great job, Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2022 2:21:00 PM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Komal Walimbe

Date: 8/11/2022 7:51:00 AM

Such an mesmerizing verse! Amazingly described I could imagine it all... Great write and wonderfully penned! Good luck for the contest. Have a great day.. :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2022 2:21:00 PM

So very kind of you. Much appreciate your visit and delightful remarks. Many thanks, Komal.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/11/2022 3:13:00 AM

- ... a beautiful sound you have described ... as always a first class poem, Vijay - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2022 5:18:00 AM

So very kind of you, Anne-Lise. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 8/11/2022 2:37:00 AM

You have created such a wonderful verse in this Rispetto form, that seems to have some limitations in syllable counts and rhyme schemes, which I have so far never tried Vijayji. First stanza JUST beautiful! As always, lovely alliterations and rhymes. This contest filled up so fast, oh my and am afraid I may miss it... Best wishes in the contest... God bless... ~ Ani

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2022 5:17:00 AM

Looking forward to reading your entry. Much appreciate your visit and supportive comments, as always. Many thanks, Ani.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/10/2022 9:35:00 PM

This is beautiful, Vijay. love the theme and how you have woven the words within it.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2022 5:16:00 AM

Thank you Harry. Much appreciate your visit and kind feedback.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/10/2022 7:49:00 PM

"Where butterflies waltz, fluttering ardent wings" Such a beautiful image. Your thoughts drift through the sky with elegance and grace, and I'm floating with you, on this magical journey. This is breathtaking in every way, Vijay. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/11/2022 5:15:00 AM

Always a joy to read your insightful remarks my friend. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Brandy. Many thanks for your kind remarks.

Joseph May

Date: 8/10/2022 1:02:00 PM

Beautifully penned Vijay, best for a top win

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2022 3:24:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. Much appreciate your kind feedback.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/10/2022 10:54:00 AM

No sweeter sounds than the sounds of mother earth, you captured them well Vijay. Best of luck. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2022 3:24:00 PM

So glad to hear that, Tom. Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/10/2022 10:45:00 AM

You are an ageless poet Vijay, always on the spot, gl in the contest,

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2022 3:22:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and comments, Vienna. Many thanks for the kind remarks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/10/2022 8:21:00 AM

A symphony of beautiful sounds that expand the quote you chose. I have no doubt it will rate high.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/10/2022 3:22:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and comments and your vote of confidence, Victor. Many thanks.