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Souls Of The Seas-revised

The souls of the seas are committed to their maritime dwell, and the reflected tides shall bear stars on silent waves that mourn. I expired in sorrow's seizing of my life, and now my grieving for humanity has left my earthly body. My soul journeys to my beloved Yeshua- as the merpeople attend my seashell bier in the summer temperate of the vasty Atlantic's heart. ~

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/14/2024 6:40:00 PM

Dearest Regina, soulful poetess, the deep emotion and rich imagery of your poem is breathtaking. A profound and poignant piece. Congratulations for your exquisite poem being showcased in Silent One's contest. I'm honored to share the contest list with you, my sweet friend. Warmest wishes.. I hope your 2024 is going well.. ~Susan

Regina Elliott
Date: 1/15/2024 6:25:00 AM

My deepest gratitude to you, sweet laureate poetess of America. You are so kind and thoughtful. Many blessings to you, lovely Susan, for a wondrous and bright 2024!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/4/2024 7:50:00 AM

WOW!!! I enjoyed reading this beautiful write/great ending. Love your last 4 lines... Glad Silent One did this. Have a beautiful day writing away........................

Regina Elliott
Date: 1/15/2024 6:26:00 AM

So sorry I'm late getting back to you, dear Paula. Thank you so very much, you are so kind. A wonderful 2024 to you and yours!

Howard Kerr

Date: 1/3/2024 12:17:00 PM

Hello Regina, I’m delighted that this astonishing piece has been acknowledged. A work of superior depth and imagination. Warm regards Howard

Silent One
Date: 1/3/2024 2:31:00 PM

You said it so poetically... Thank you

Regina Elliott
Date: 1/3/2024 2:04:00 PM

Hi Howard, deepest thanks. You are so very kind. I hope your first week of 2024 is going quite well. My warmest regards and wishes. ~

Silent One

Date: 1/3/2024 12:13:00 PM

A lovely poem my friend, which you expressed so well.. must have been a recent NA and I think I can guess for which contest... I placed everyone! This wasn't really a contest, but an opportunity to showcase an Na poem..

Regina Elliott
Date: 1/3/2024 2:02:00 PM

Thank you so much, Silent One, you are such a kind man to showcase the N/A poems, and giving us all 1st Place. Your compassion is a balm to our sensitive poet's souls. I hope your first week of 2024 is going splendid. Warmest regards to you. ~

Howard Kerr

Date: 12/21/2023 11:22:00 PM

Hi Regina, Thank you so much for your reflections on Yet I Cling You have composed a profound piece which stirs the emotions. First class as per usual Have a wonderful weekend Howard

Bill Baker

Date: 12/19/2023 9:37:00 PM

Well written poem of those that live and die on the sea. The imagery was exquisite, Regina. I enjoyed reading your poetry today, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/18/2023 3:30:00 PM

delightful imagery both real and spiritual. Your poem was also poignant and sad -- souls committed to their maritime dwell. Just wow...you have a wonderful poetic voice...thanks for sharing it on PS. Merry Christmas, Sara

Regina Elliott
Date: 12/19/2023 6:01:00 AM

My deepest gratitude, dear Sara. I'll be visiting your exquisite pages soon. xxxx

Silent One

Date: 12/18/2023 12:40:00 PM

Woah!! Your poetic expression takes the reader on a poignant voyage through the seas, both earthly and spiritual. The vivid portrayal of the souls of the seas committed to their maritime dwell is mesmerising.... The use of reflected tides bearing stars and silent waves that mourn adds a touch of ethereal beauty to the imagery.

Regina Elliott
Date: 12/19/2023 6:03:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Silent One. Your comments mean so much to me. I will be visiting your superior poetry page soon. ~

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/18/2023 8:29:00 AM

Wow, Regina, you are a master with imagery. I cant write like you. I get the neaning of the p oem loud and clear, however))) “A.Y.C” Pangie

Regina Elliott
Date: 12/19/2023 6:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, dear Pangie. Your friendship means the world to me. xxxx