Souls

Souls Hallowed kingdom, Love, the power and truth, unlimited skies’ dome … Souls’ indeed, returned to the precept of multi grace, never roam… For hollowed be those mercy sons that return to their love’s home… Love has a body of souls, now through world’s wilderness they comb! For Brian Strand Contest

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Chiquitachiamaka Baity

Date: 8/4/2011 11:41:00 PM

Sensitive and spiritual piece....i luv it!!!!

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 7/29/2011 1:45:00 AM

Like what you say here very much! Caryl

John Beam

Date: 7/6/2011 10:10:00 AM

thanks for congrats and Love draws and delievers, hope for one more to come to the Lord have a blessed day, enjoyed this one very much

Constance La France

Date: 5/29/2011 9:31:00 AM

A very spiriitual write, John, best of luck with this poem.. regarding your recent blog on Percep thinking, I agree with everything you wrote so well and I will add God is the gate, if a person makes themselves a God, judging others, that gate will be closed and locked to them, for there is only one God ~~

John Freeman
Date: 5/30/2011 6:26:00 AM

Absolutely Constance, the door is closed to all judgement. Loving descernment is the order of the day with Love's source. Agape, Moses

Don Johnson

Date: 5/24/2011 2:03:00 AM

Great sensitive concept ...I agree love is power of attraction on ya mate Don

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/23/2011 3:31:00 AM

Well put Moses ... apt. Great reminder to keep things in perspective ...souls in exile...for a short while... Thank you for sharing.. Many times we get caught up in the affairs of this world and forget what it's all about. Nice one

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2011 9:40:00 PM

a nice one on souls, john. great monorhyming!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/22/2011 12:34:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this one..If only...Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in the contest...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/22/2011 11:27:00 AM

Moses such intense and deeply moving words..luv the souls indeed returned to the precept of multi grace.. never roam line.. it truly depicts the energy and reward of the pure soul... enjoyed with much agape ..my friend on this terrific Sunday..luv.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2011 10:51:00 AM

We surely have an army of souls who have returned to the precept-level thinking, John. Some were always that way. Love the way you described these souls combing the "world's wilderness." Terrific entry for Brian's contest and I wish you success, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/22/2011 9:52:00 AM

HI John, Didn't know there was a contest with this interesting theme...u write for it so well. Souls that never roam...a precept of multi grace. This is lyrical....and free. Gwendolen

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 5/22/2011 9:34:00 AM

Nicely done! Good luck in the contest! Regards, Robert.