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Another impoverished evening draped so strangely harsh, the moon weeps for one more burning a soul must retain... And she clings among lost stars with frozen heartbeat thawing minutes weighed on jagged sounds of owl's play. Yet, an intercepted light begins to kindle as she gazes at an old man by a lamp post, seemingly collecting crumbs of reminiscences-- The tick of hours mirroring her own disquiet while lovers pause to catch flurry of mist: She quivers turns away from the glass pane listening to the teapot ... her meditative chant for now-- Till a discovery of self-awakening lifts gently Where a tiny place in her bosom invites calmness yet to be born ...through growing roots of spirit- fire. 6/26/2019

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Date: 7/3/2019 9:42:00 AM
Beautiful writing and imagination! Congratulations to you.
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Date: 7/2/2019 2:46:00 AM
A tea pot meditation. I like that. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 7/1/2019 1:51:00 PM
Hello Nette, I also like this poem. This poem is beautifully done. My favs. verses are 2 and 3. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 7/1/2019 10:54:00 AM
This is exquisite Nette! A profound soul search by a kindred spirit. I loved this and am faving it my friend. I hope it is a top winner! : ) xxoo
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Date: 6/29/2019 1:49:00 PM
WOW Nette, I have no words left to describe your angelic, creative, fascinating poetry - you are certainly in a league of your own! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/28/2019 3:15:00 PM
My friend, your poetry never fails to deliver its beauty, depth of thought, and immense creativity and artistic power... A fav.. a shining gem this is..
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Date: 6/28/2019 10:09:00 AM
Nette, your beautiful mind and vast vocabulary partner to create brilliant and emotive vignettes from so few words. Your short poem becomes an extensive play in my mind. Thank you for this joy you give!
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Date: 6/27/2019 6:00:00 PM
I never thought your spirit was anything else but spirit fire infused, your words invite me in like a nice warm drink, Love your poetry Nette, Winning wishes being sent your way xo
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Date: 6/26/2019 11:28:00 AM
A wonderful write...Such is the magic of poetry..."while lovers pause to catch flurry of mist" All the best
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