Hiii everyone, this is my first couplet poem ever! Written for Regina's
~ Autumn's Breath Contest ~
O heart of hiraeth, bathed in honey-blush kiss, hear me heal, meet this sorceress soul, you miss ... when the handwritten rose stars weep, and I b l o o m ; with the ink of iris, weaving webs of doom breathe... eclipse-glazed moon, my muse, as we bleed... be the last balm for forlorn fates that heed... as autumn burns on the bones of the sky, the veins of lightning veil my lips with lie; through the dusk-foliage where intuitions dwell deep and scarlet fairies flicker with faith ~ to let leaves sleep... O phoenix sun ~ you'll let the fire of luck flow; as bronze heat of hate wanes in your garnet glow... because beauty is a bane b o r n to d i e ; with warm ~I c a r u s~ wings, I seethe to sigh... so sing with me... the sunset of fallen season, promise me ~ you'll remember this rhythm of reason please... close your eyes, surrender to the caramel calmness, till those maple lifelines rest... lovelorn... with scarred rustiness; let this poet's pulse rip my ribs, to feel your ruby embers ~ and I, will always spell the sixth sense of ~ s o u l f u l s e p t e m b e r ~...
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