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Sonnet For Spring

As days grow longer, melancholy creeps
An uninvited guest, which winter brings
It dims the candle my mind tightly clings
Consuming light, from darkness whence he leaps

In doldrums dark, my heart held captive weeps
Held hostage by north winds that bite and sting
Entombed by winter's chill, awaiting spring
Time slowing to a crawl whilst nature sleeps

But then one day in March, an equinox
The light begins to overtake the dark
In color, daydreams dawn as dark does fade
Sad melancholy flees through fields of phlox
Now freed from winter's bonds, my heart embarks
To chase spring's sun into the summer shade.


  by Daniel Turner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 1:12 PM
Sad melancholy flees through fields of phlox…turning a page…March chill releases its grip and Spring’s released! God bless you, Daniel!
Turner Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 1:31 PM
Thank you, Kim. It's always my pleasure when you drop by. Take care and God bless:)
Cornish Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 10:13 AM
Daniel, it's obvious you have much fun with the sonnet form---your art shines through.
Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 12:34 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely sonnet. Enjoyed it.
George   Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 3:28 AM
This is simply lovely. Many congrats on your win. Sincerely, Elaine
Wigley Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 1:33 AM
Congrats, Daniel, a fine write. 'Euinox' and 'Phlox'- genius. Regards, Viv
Canerdy Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 9:43 PM
LOVE it! Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Daniel! Janice
Roper Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 8:48 PM
Congratulations on your win, Daniel, wonderful write and imagery ! Hugs Eve~`*
Gauthier Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 4:28 PM
Lovely, Daniel. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Duet Avatar
April 10, 2018 at 9:25 PM
You are in the light now, Danny. It shines from your pen like a laser beam into the hearts of your readers...like me. Just another FAV from you...Carole :D
Hoffman Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 7:01 PM
A beautiful nature spring sonnet Daniel; a true yearning for spring time!~Che :)
Hamilton Avatar
March 27, 2018 at 3:41 PM
This is sooo good Danny, so nice to have you around here, you give this site dignity with your writing, simply superb writing, keep going!!!We want more!!
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2018 at 8:32 PM
I do believe you have a winner, here, Danny boy. It's so good to see you posting again!! Love this.
May Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 10:01 AM
A beautiful spring sonnet Daniel..best wishes in the contest
Onclaud Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 2:26 PM
daniel, how you uplift with the fine arrival of a season so well defined through your sonnet... this deserves a second, third read... huggs
Godwin Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 1:46 PM
A beautiful poem, Daniel. Real life sentiment held your pen - just need to realize the last stanza and closer. It shall happen for you are meant to feel such a Spring. This was a joy to read, the lovely lines blossoming like a flower before me. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Downing  Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 8:22 PM
Oh that grass and those little flowers are teasingly inviting me for a nap there... Lol! I am so ready for some warm weather. I could just jump right into summer for spring does kills me with bad allergies. Danny your poem is gorgeous, I simply enjoyed it... Hope you're doing well my dear! Hugs and smiles :)
Gondolf Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 8:12 AM
What a great sonnet, Daniel, best of luck in the contest. John
Kannan Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 5:12 AM
Such a spectacular sonnet ... Loved it totally... Happy to read your sonnet after a long time... Good luck in the contest...
Salehi Avatar
March 15, 2018 at 2:35 AM
Magnificent poem DT.... Spring is good and all.... but makes me miserable with allergies..... tell me a story about Fall. Spring is beautiful, all green nearby.... I am watching from a window, as I espy.
Haight Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 5:04 PM
Such a lovely Sonnet, Daniel. I felt the emotion of winter depression and darkness while we are hostage to her season, and the hope of freedom when spring overtakes! Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
Daniel Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 9:24 AM
Beautiful, DT:) I love the positivity of spring:)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 9:01 AM
Simple beautiful Italian sonnet, Daniel. Masterful weaving of the seasons ... w/a crescendo ending. Your pen soul shines brightly. GREAT poem! Love and joy always.
Krampe Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 7:31 AM
Daniel, this sonnet is fantastic! It speaks to me; I had a hard time with seasonal depression this winter, and you find such beautiful words to describe that. The sonnet form works perfectly because of the natural turn towards the light. Love this poem, fave!
Canerdy Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 12:57 AM
Beautiful description of how nature-- and we-- change when spring arrives, Daniel! Janice
One Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 2:38 PM
I've never tackled an Italian sonnet before, it has an interesting rhyme scheme.. You did this very well.. Nice imagery and I like the flow to it..
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