Sonnet For Mother's Day To My Wife and Daughters

(Written about 2005, as a sonnet, but I cannot recall why I used 13 rather than 14 syllables per line. Maybe Petrachan? Forgive me if it fails the sonnet test.)


For My Wife and Daughters: STREAMS OF CONSCIOUSNESS
eighty percent water in me wants unity here oscillating in bones, gurgling words in my bloodstream, verging on vigorous waterways, my own river converging dreams, I take our daughters to park and stream few, if any, waterfowl and fauna peek at us now tiny tributaries of separation bring dirt now, even in spring, the waters are still running low no flowers or flora frolic between sky and earth we inhabit deltas of exuberance, then the freeze … shallows of calm showed my girls sunfish, pebbles galore abounding like diamonds in my land of jealousies now, as streams in the world begin to slow, run shallow I am one in the God of all, born of Africa my daughters’ bloodstreams murmur songs of America

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/26/2017 8:03:00 PM
Anil quite an honor to your Wife and daughters. They are blessed to have you. A very well thought out sonnet!
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Date: 5/16/2017 5:44:00 PM
a lovely tribute Anil I am sure your wife and daughter are very touched by your poems:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/9/2017 7:28:00 AM
Hi Anil... your style of your writing was already quite visible 12 years ago. This poem, based on clever metaphorical streams, is surely one of your best...at least that's how I see it. #7 Regards // paul
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Date: 5/9/2017 6:18:00 AM
Good Morning Once Again Anil. Sonnet format aside because words matter most with me and the format second. Honestly. Thus your words are a beautiful tribute to both your wife and daughters especially with the upcoming Mother's Day. Hold this close and dear. Have a wonderful morning and day. Well done and yes Shalom always.
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Date: 5/9/2017 12:59:00 AM
A superb sonnet and great tribute!
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Date: 5/8/2017 10:24:00 PM
Beautuful Anil! Fine tribute!
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