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Somewhere

Satin sand expands slipping between bare toes - night strolls through star clad dream. Where full moon draws the tide, my soul lights an aimless path. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 1/8/15 for Nette Onclaud's Somewhere Contest 30 syllables

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Date: 1/16/2015 3:00:00 PM
Reading your words, such an aimless path will lead somewhere. Many congrats on your win Rhonda, James :)
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Date: 1/15/2015 1:50:00 AM
Fantastic write Rhonda! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 1/15/2015 12:46:00 AM
this one was superb. Would have put it top three if it were my contest. congrats, my sweet friend.
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Date: 1/14/2015 9:30:00 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:32:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win, this places higher on my list. lots of love always Armand.
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:15:00 AM
Hi Rhonda Love Congrats. God bless.rajat
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Date: 1/13/2015 9:42:00 PM
A Great visual to be somewhere, congrats on the win, Rhonda
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:44:00 PM
ooo that sounds great!
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:25:00 PM
Congrats on the win Rhonda...huggs
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Date: 1/13/2015 2:48:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/13/2015 2:05:00 PM
Hi Rhonda, stopping back to say congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/13/2015 1:03:00 PM
congratulations Rhonda on your win with this lovely poem
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Date: 1/12/2015 2:56:00 PM
Absolutely amazing! Your images draw the reader down the path with you.
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Date: 1/11/2015 10:02:00 PM
I love your Somewhere poem, Rhonda. Such a dreamy and calm feeling in your well-chosen words. GL in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/10/2015 9:17:00 AM
Oh you certainly paint a portrait of words here, beautiful poetry...
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Date: 1/10/2015 2:51:00 AM
I'd like to be there.. wow!!!
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Date: 1/9/2015 11:00:00 PM
wow, everyone is coming up with such good stuff why the heck can't I think of one for this one. I think I lost my ability to dream, that must be why. This is great imagery, dear. And regarding what you asked me, yes, Marie had a community of poets. We had our poems all shown at our "house" (I was in sonnet square, something like that) and she had a yahoogroup where we did little contests, nothing big like there though.
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Date: 1/9/2015 6:10:00 AM
I repeat myself but you are a born poet. A stunning write.
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Date: 1/8/2015 12:46:00 PM
Bright is your light on any path -- lovely write. 7
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Date: 1/8/2015 12:13:00 PM
Absolutely beautifully penned Rhonda - love the imagery and the alliteration - good luck - this will place very well for you:-) Hugs jan xx
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