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Quatern
A Quatern is a sixteen-line French form composed of four quatrains. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two, the third line of stanza three, and the fourth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme. line 1 line 2 line 3 line 4 line 5 line 6 (line 1) line 7 line 8 line 9 line 10 line 11 (line 1) line 12 line 13 line 14 line 15 line 16 (line 1)

Some secrets spin a veil of lies, creating a web of deceit. And yet, some secrets survive to guard the essence of who you are. Though stored behind a shield of trust, some secrets spin a veil of lies. But, tucked in between hope and love, no trespassing signs get posted. If you do not share everything, you are only being human. Some secrets spin a veil of lies, and some weave privacy curtains. There are thoughts you alone should know, private things not meant to be shared. And though some secrets are innate, some secrets spin a veil of lies. (Quatern) 11/01/2021 ''S'' Contest, New Poems Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 11/6/2021 5:49:00 AM
Emile, awesome writing and congratulations on your Second Place win in my "S" Contest, love the quote image also ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/6/2021 6:55:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, as always your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/6/2021 12:13:00 AM
"Some secrets spin a veil of lies, creating a web of deceit." - Thus stating a great truth your poem flows very fluently. Great work. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/6/2021 6:54:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 11/1/2021 6:18:00 PM
Absolutely, positively perfect writing. This quatern is everything it should be, so well-composed. I loved it, Emile. Thanks!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 11/1/2021 6:37:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, you honor me my friend, Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs