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Some Might Call It Baggage

Some might call it baggage I am at the ending of my wits, I can’t take this much more There’s something quite amiss with you, it seems there is for sure I’ve asked you nice so many times, yet this I must endure It doesn’t take that long at all, a second for this chore Perhaps when you were smaller, as a child young and pure Something so horrific scared you badly long before And you just can’t get past it as your mind it does explore A nightmare in the kitchen that will cause you to ignore I love you, oh I swear I do, it’s you that I adore But, there is just this little thing that irks me to my core Some might call it baggage, but right now to me its war So tell me, would it kill you once, to close a cabinet door A pet peeve : ) Written for the “Gems for your Baggage” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 2/28/2017 10:34:00 PM
Bahahaha!!:) well done Chris!! Lol. Congratulations! Love it. Big Hugggs deb
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Chris Green
Date: 3/1/2017 9:22:00 AM
Thanks so very much Deborah
Date: 2/22/2017 2:01:00 PM
Leave that toilet seat up, congratulations Chris...
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Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 2:04:00 PM
Ha, now why didn't I think of that? Thanks Charlie. :)
Date: 2/20/2017 6:37:00 PM
Congrats on your placement. Yes, sometimes it's small things like those that drive one crazy.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 8:48:00 AM
Yep, but we still love them. :) Thanks so very much Agnes
Date: 2/20/2017 6:28:00 PM
Laughing out loud on this one, Chris. Very nice. Congratulations on your well deserved placement with this pet peeve of yours. Hugs!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 8:47:00 AM
Thank you so much Dane Ann. I am happy this made you laugh.
Date: 2/20/2017 4:25:00 PM
Back to happily congratulate you! Hugs ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 8:47:00 AM
Thank you so very much CayCay
Date: 2/20/2017 3:59:00 PM
Sure made me chuckle again Chris:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 8:47:00 AM
Laughter is always the best. Thanks again Jan
Date: 2/20/2017 3:51:00 PM
A great win, Chris! Loved that last line. Big congrats to you in the contest.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 8:46:00 AM
Thank you Andrea for always showing me such kindness
Date: 2/20/2017 3:44:00 PM
Chris, you kept her baggage in suspense until the end. A great entry for the contest! Congratulations on your placement.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/21/2017 8:46:00 AM
Thank you so very much Carolyn, it was a pleasure to enter your contest and an honor to place in it. I am happy you liked this one.
Date: 2/5/2017 12:48:00 PM
Well done - you got a big laugh from me! Good and imaginative writing, Chris ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 2/6/2017 8:45:00 AM
Glad this one made you laugh my friend. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 2/2/2017 1:32:00 AM
Oh yeah, what's the big deal in taking time to close that?? Ha ha, and switch off that light, will ya;) amazing, Chris:)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/2/2017 1:34:00 PM
Thanks so much Jo. I am happy you had a laugh with this one. :)
Date: 1/31/2017 11:45:00 AM
And close the door to the room... And turn off the light when you leave a room... And don't leave plates and cutlery on the table, PUT THEM IN THE SINK hahaha
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2017 12:47:00 PM
A pet peeve is some little annoying thing that bothers you. Like someone not turning the light off when they leave the room. It doesn't bother them but it bothers you...that is one of your pet peeves. :) Thanks so much Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 1/31/2017 11:45:00 AM
What exactly is 'pet peeve'?
Date: 1/31/2017 11:40:00 AM
It's funny how we all have our own little idiosyncrasies, quirks. Lord knows I have my share:) Great poem for the contest, Chris. Good luck!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2017 12:46:00 PM
Thanks so much Daniel. I'm not a big fan of this poem but this is how it came out. :)
Date: 1/31/2017 11:39:00 AM
Oh gee .. An open cabinet door, I do hate that, especially if I hit ny foot with it right now.,, Funny poembChris.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2017 12:45:00 PM
No, I am sure that wouldn't be any fun right now. :) Thanks so much my sweet friend.
Date: 1/31/2017 11:08:00 AM
Funny stuff... and don't stand in the entrance way...please!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2017 12:45:00 PM
Wow, it seems the list is growing. :) Thanks John.
Date: 1/31/2017 10:49:00 AM
LOL
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Date: 1/31/2017 10:34:00 AM
I have a couple of these wooden cabinets in my kitchen that won't quite stay shut, what would you Chris? LOL!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2017 10:37:00 AM
Duct tape? :) Thanks so much Heidi, even if they don't close all of the way, just the attempt is good enough for me.
Date: 1/31/2017 10:33:00 AM
Nice job! Those stupid dresser and cabinet doors!
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2017 10:39:00 AM
Thanks so very much Kim. Especially walking into a lower one left open...ouch!!!
Date: 1/31/2017 10:26:00 AM
ha ha ha my hubby moans at me for leaving the doors open but if I am in the kitchen cooking then its MY prerogative and I do close them when I've finished .... now if he put the food away after he'd made something .... dont get me started lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2017 10:29:00 AM
Sure you do Jan, sure you do. :) Thanks so much my friend. I'm glad you got a chuckle out of this one
Date: 1/31/2017 10:07:00 AM
I did get a laugh out of this one Chris. Great monorhyme. :) Good luck in the contest.
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2017 10:09:00 AM
Thanks so very much Heidi. :)
Date: 1/31/2017 9:44:00 AM
....and stop drinking from the milk carton......thanks for the chuckle Chris
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Chris Green
Date: 1/31/2017 10:06:00 AM
Exactly...thanks so much John.

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