Some Might Call It Baggage

Some might call it baggage

I am at the ending of my wits, I can’t take this much more
There’s something quite amiss with you, it seems there is for sure
I’ve asked you nice so many times, yet this I must endure
It doesn’t take that long at all, a second for this chore 

Perhaps when you were smaller, as a child young and pure
Something so horrific scared you badly long before
And you just can’t get past it as your mind it does explore
A nightmare in the kitchen that will cause you to ignore

I love you, oh I swear I do, it’s you that I adore
But, there is just this little thing that irks me to my core
Some might call it baggage, but right now to me its war
So tell me, would it kill you once, to close a cabinet door


A pet peeve : ) 

 
Written for the “Gems for your Baggage” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Burch Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 10:34 PM
Bahahaha!!:) well done Chris!! Lol. Congratulations! Love it. Big Hugggs deb
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March 1, 2017 at 9:22 AM
Thanks so very much Deborah
Smith Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 2:01 PM
Leave that toilet seat up, congratulations Chris...
Green Avatar
February 22, 2017 at 2:04 PM
Ha, now why didn't I think of that? Thanks Charlie. :)
Krampe Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 6:37 PM
Congrats on your placement. Yes, sometimes it's small things like those that drive one crazy.
Green Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Yep, but we still love them. :) Thanks so very much Agnes
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February 20, 2017 at 6:28 PM
Laughing out loud on this one, Chris. Very nice. Congratulations on your well deserved placement with this pet peeve of yours. Hugs!
Green Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 8:47 AM
Thank you so much Dane Ann. I am happy this made you laugh.
Godwin Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 4:25 PM
Back to happily congratulate you! Hugs ... CayCay
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February 21, 2017 at 8:47 AM
Thank you so very much CayCay
Allison Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 3:59 PM
Sure made me chuckle again Chris:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 8:47 AM
Laughter is always the best. Thanks again Jan
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2017 at 3:51 PM
A great win, Chris! Loved that last line. Big congrats to you in the contest.
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February 21, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Thank you Andrea for always showing me such kindness
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February 20, 2017 at 3:44 PM
Chris, you kept her baggage in suspense until the end. A great entry for the contest! Congratulations on your placement.
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February 21, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Thank you so very much Carolyn, it was a pleasure to enter your contest and an honor to place in it. I am happy you liked this one.
Godwin Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 12:48 PM
Well done - you got a big laugh from me! Good and imaginative writing, Chris ... CayCay
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February 6, 2017 at 8:45 AM
Glad this one made you laugh my friend. Thanks for stopping by.
Daniel Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 1:32 AM
Oh yeah, what's the big deal in taking time to close that?? Ha ha, and switch off that light, will ya;) amazing, Chris:)
Green Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 1:34 PM
Thanks so much Jo. I am happy you had a laugh with this one. :)
White Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 11:45 AM
And close the door to the room... And turn off the light when you leave a room... And don't leave plates and cutlery on the table, PUT THEM IN THE SINK hahaha
Green Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 12:47 PM
A pet peeve is some little annoying thing that bothers you. Like someone not turning the light off when they leave the room. It doesn't bother them but it bothers you...that is one of your pet peeves. :) Thanks so much Darren.
White Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 11:45 AM
What exactly is 'pet peeve'?
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January 31, 2017 at 11:40 AM
It's funny how we all have our own little idiosyncrasies, quirks. Lord knows I have my share:) Great poem for the contest, Chris. Good luck!
Green Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 12:46 PM
Thanks so much Daniel. I'm not a big fan of this poem but this is how it came out. :)
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January 31, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Oh gee .. An open cabinet door, I do hate that, especially if I hit ny foot with it right now.,, Funny poembChris.
Green Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 12:45 PM
No, I am sure that wouldn't be any fun right now. :) Thanks so much my sweet friend.
Hamilton Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 11:08 AM
Funny stuff... and don't stand in the entrance way...please!
Green Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 12:45 PM
Wow, it seems the list is growing. :) Thanks John.
Sands Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 10:49 AM
LOL
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January 31, 2017 at 10:34 AM
I have a couple of these wooden cabinets in my kitchen that won't quite stay shut, what would you Chris? LOL!
Green Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 10:37 AM
Duct tape? :) Thanks so much Heidi, even if they don't close all of the way, just the attempt is good enough for me.
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January 31, 2017 at 10:33 AM
Nice job! Those stupid dresser and cabinet doors!
Green Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 10:39 AM
Thanks so very much Kim. Especially walking into a lower one left open...ouch!!!
Allison Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 10:26 AM
ha ha ha my hubby moans at me for leaving the doors open but if I am in the kitchen cooking then its MY prerogative and I do close them when I've finished .... now if he put the food away after he'd made something .... dont get me started lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Green Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 10:29 AM
Sure you do Jan, sure you do. :) Thanks so much my friend. I'm glad you got a chuckle out of this one
Sands Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 10:07 AM
I did get a laugh out of this one Chris. Great monorhyme. :) Good luck in the contest.
Green Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 10:09 AM
Thanks so very much Heidi. :)
Lawless Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 9:44 AM
....and stop drinking from the milk carton......thanks for the chuckle Chris
Green Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 10:06 AM
Exactly...thanks so much John.
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