Some Distant Shore

Silent, she slips from her stronghold’s security, safely tucked high on the cliff in her nest. Cautious, she stays in the shadows afforded her, sorrowful, hesitant, missing the rest. Her parents and siblings had sought out the sunshine, flying the open air, learning their craft. Soaring and diving, they basked in the currents; she, feeling poorly, by chance, had stayed back. Sounds like a cannon had rung out above her; shrieking and screaming, she watched the first fall. Caught in the open with no chance for cover, savagely, swiftly, death came for them all. Hugging the hillside, she used the thick foliage, bobbing and weaving, avoiding the limbs, calling on instincts she knew not inside her, fine-tuned adjustments through flexes and trims. Cover was ending; the ocean awaited her. Her heart was racing, her mind strangely clear. Mother had taught her to seek out the currents; a warm water pocket meant updrafts were near. Tucking, she dove as she flew in the open, a bullet herself, towards shiny blue glass. Braking so subtly, just at the last moment, she shot across wave tops, dizzily fast. There! A small change in the water beneath her. Pulling up hard, she flapped skyward and soared. Where she was headed lay unknown before her, on past the sunset to some distant shore.

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Date: 5/19/2023 1:20:00 PM
as one who put up the superstructures, i have seen a few pigeons taken by a peregrine falcon....pronghorn taken by a mountain lion...nature is never without drama and this is a well-executed poem on that natural occurrence, very well-described inner work on the bird's interior turmoil, certainly deserving the recognition...congrats
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 5/19/2023 3:06:00 PM
thanks for the read and the gracious comments, Timothy!
Date: 10/8/2022 7:47:00 AM
Always wondered if I can find any of you are on Facebook. Also wondered how poets developed their poetic talent. The world is covered with so much tragedy. Must be more direct and select how to players should inspect. Now I am hearing about Camp LeJeune.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/8/2022 8:15:00 AM
I am on Facebook, but I don’t do as much with it these days. Certainly would respond to a friend request from you, knowing that was you. I’ve only been writing here less than a year, but I have been trying every different form I can find. I suck at some, like others a lot.
Date: 7/29/2022 7:52:00 AM
Wow! No. 1 on the Best List and I can see why. Your imagery of words morphed into a motion picture; it makes me think about "Jonathan Livingston Seagull"; self-reliance and endurance. Kudos! :)Paulette
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/29/2022 9:10:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind words, Paulette!
Date: 7/27/2022 2:27:00 PM
I am happy to see this wonderful poem and favorite of mine at the top of the best new poems list Jeff. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/27/2022 2:28:00 PM
I was a bit shocked - thanks so much for your continued kind words!
Date: 7/27/2022 2:13:00 AM
I'm late to the party once again. Congratulations on two fronts: A POTD earlier this month and now the top position in the 'Best New Poems' list. Cheers - Gary
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/27/2022 4:00:00 AM
Wow, I never would have guessed that one. I am delighted that it has resonated with people. My wife refers to it as the murder birds poem, lol. Thanks, Gary!
Date: 7/26/2022 5:43:00 PM
Hi Jeff Congratulations on you win with this lovely descriptive and captivating poem. Yes this one was mean’t to survive and hopefully found the distant shore Nice work Cheers Christine
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Date: 7/26/2022 3:43:00 PM
Nice one Jeff. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 7/26/2022 9:44:00 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on your New win. A beautiful write. Have a very blessed day...............
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Date: 7/26/2022 3:50:00 AM
A poem with some great beauty. Thanks, Jeff.
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Date: 7/21/2022 8:23:00 PM
Dear Jeff, I was captivated by the expressive empathy and dramatic bittersweet beauty of your poem. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/21/2022 12:00:00 AM
Jeff, you already know how much I loved and Faved this amazing poem. The best of the best! I am so happy to see it on the winner’s list and feel honored to be in your company too. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/20/2022 9:10:00 PM
Jeff, I thoroughly enjoyed this. A fave for me. Your poem is as dramatic as an episode of the renowned wildlife and nature documentary series "Marty Stouffer's Wild America". Congratulations on your win on mile 8 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 9 has already started!
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Date: 7/20/2022 8:17:00 PM
A flawlessly fluent narration of struggle and win. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/20/2022 1:42:00 AM
So, so, powerful! A clear fave. Superb writing at the highest level, Jeff!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/20/2022 7:56:00 AM
Thanks so much for your kind words!
Date: 7/7/2022 10:14:00 AM
- Woow ... love it, Heidi :) - Congratulations on p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/20/2022 7:56:00 AM
So glad you enjoyed it, thanks!
Date: 7/5/2022 4:43:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Jeff. And how we love an underdog who begins to soar! I especially love your last two lines. Congratulations on POTD!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/5/2022 7:23:00 PM
Thanks, Ann. I've been a little surprised at the response to this one.
Date: 7/5/2022 9:38:00 AM
I wonder how I missed this beautiful poem. Being a little busy, I didn't look at the POTDs for about a week. The bird's final flight into the unknown and into distant shores was a leap of confidence. Though she had stayed back, circumstances finally pushed her into a brave effort. Great poem dear friend and a well deserved POTD
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/5/2022 10:20:00 AM
I am so glad you enjoyed it - thank you for the kind words!
Date: 7/3/2022 12:18:00 AM
OMG, Jeff. I was totally enthralled with the raw emotions felt as chills formed on my skin. Your talent is brilliantly displayed in this magnificent thrilling poem. This piece is truly worthy of POTD. I hope it garners a top award. Congratulations! A fave! Blessings xxoo
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/3/2022 3:34:00 AM
I’m so glad you enjoyed it, Connie, thank you for such kind words!
Date: 7/2/2022 12:32:00 PM
Well done Jeff and congratulations on poem of the day with this wonderful poetry. We never know what birds go through, we only admire their beauty when they fly into view… Belle
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/3/2022 3:34:00 AM
Thanks so much, Belle.
Date: 7/1/2022 6:00:00 PM
Instead of being in a rush . . . "She stays in the shadows" I think many can relate. (I know I can). Of course she remembers what her "mother had taught her". Wise and Brave ! Two amazing qualities to have. You have created a Masterpiece, Jeff. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/1/2022 6:24:00 PM
Thanks, Brandy, so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 7/1/2022 5:13:00 PM
Taking a leap of faith, Congrats on POTD
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/3/2022 3:35:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph!
Date: 7/1/2022 5:08:00 PM
Congratulations on our POTD Jeff! Enrapt by the graceful intrigue of your soaring narrative.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/3/2022 3:36:00 AM
Thanks so much, Robert!
Date: 7/1/2022 5:06:00 PM
Eat your heart out Mr Attenborough, this is how it’s done. Brilliant Jeff. Congrats on your poem of the day. Sorry I’m late to the party. Terry
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/1/2022 6:38:00 PM
Ha, thanks, Terry.
Date: 7/1/2022 5:00:00 PM
Jeff, well written tale of the one survivor. Reminded me of the osprey nest I saw high on a cliff in Yellowstone. I always enjoy the cadence of your poetry, and your ability to tell a story in poetry is so admirable. Congrats on your POTD ~ John
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/1/2022 5:27:00 PM
Thanks, John, I’ve watched some amazing footage of peregrine falcons, they are amazing. Less familiar with ospreys, but beautiful birds
Date: 7/1/2022 2:14:00 PM
Jeff, a captivating poem, love the last stanza, congratulations on POTD!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 7/1/2022 2:37:00 PM
Thanks, Tania!
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