Some Distant Shore

Silent, she slips from her stronghold’s security, safely tucked high on the cliff in her nest. Cautious, she stays in the shadows afforded her, sorrowful, hesitant, missing the rest. Her parents and siblings had sought out the sunshine, flying the open air, learning their craft. Soaring and diving, they basked in the currents; she, feeling poorly, by chance, had stayed back. Sounds like a cannon had rung out above her; shrieking and screaming, she watched the first fall. Caught in the open with no chance for cover, savagely, swiftly, death came for them all. Hugging the hillside, she used the thick foliage, bobbing and weaving, avoiding the limbs, calling on instincts she knew not inside her, fine-tuned adjustments through flexes and trims. Cover was ending; the ocean awaited her. Her heart was racing, her mind strangely clear. Mother had taught her to seek out the currents; a warm water pocket meant updrafts were near. Tucking, she dove as she flew in the open, a bullet herself, towards shiny blue glass. Braking so subtly, just at the last moment, she shot across wave tops, dizzily fast. There! A small change in the water beneath her. Pulling up hard, she flapped skyward and soared. Where she was headed lay unknown before her, on past the sunset to some distant shore.
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Ray Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 1:20 PM
as one who put up the superstructures, i have seen a few pigeons taken by a peregrine falcon....pronghorn taken by a mountain lion...nature is never without drama and this is a well-executed poem on that natural occurrence, very well-described inner work on the bird's interior turmoil, certainly deserving the recognition...congrats
Kyser Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 3:06 PM
thanks for the read and the gracious comments, Timothy!
Horn Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 7:47 AM
Always wondered if I can find any of you are on Facebook. Also wondered how poets developed their poetic talent. The world is covered with so much tragedy. Must be more direct and select how to players should inspect. Now I am hearing about Camp LeJeune.
Kyser Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 8:15 AM
I am on Facebook, but I don’t do as much with it these days. Certainly would respond to a friend request from you, knowing that was you. I’ve only been writing here less than a year, but I have been trying every different form I can find. I suck at some, like others a lot.
Calasibetta Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Wow! No. 1 on the Best List and I can see why. Your imagery of words morphed into a motion picture; it makes me think about "Jonathan Livingston Seagull"; self-reliance and endurance. Kudos! :)Paulette
Kyser Avatar
July 29, 2022 at 9:10 AM
Thanks so much for your kind words, Paulette!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 2:27 PM
I am happy to see this wonderful poem and favorite of mine at the top of the best new poems list Jeff. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Kyser Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 2:28 PM
I was a bit shocked - thanks so much for your continued kind words!
Radice Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 2:13 AM
I'm late to the party once again. Congratulations on two fronts: A POTD earlier this month and now the top position in the 'Best New Poems' list. Cheers - Gary
Kyser Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 4:00 AM
Wow, I never would have guessed that one. I am delighted that it has resonated with people. My wife refers to it as the murder birds poem, lol. Thanks, Gary!
Watts Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 5:43 PM
Hi Jeff Congratulations on you win with this lovely descriptive and captivating poem. Yes this one was mean’t to survive and hopefully found the distant shore Nice work Cheers Christine
Fowler Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 3:43 PM
Nice one Jeff. Congratulations on your win! Linda
Goldsmith Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 9:44 AM
Back with "Congratulations" on your New win. A beautiful write. Have a very blessed day...............
John Avatar
July 26, 2022 at 3:50 AM
A poem with some great beauty. Thanks, Jeff.
Ashley Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 8:23 PM
Dear Jeff, I was captivated by the expressive empathy and dramatic bittersweet beauty of your poem. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 12:00 AM
Jeff, you already know how much I loved and Faved this amazing poem. The best of the best! I am so happy to see it on the winner’s list and feel honored to be in your company too. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo
Toney Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 9:10 PM
Jeff, I thoroughly enjoyed this. A fave for me. Your poem is as dramatic as an episode of the renowned wildlife and nature documentary series "Marty Stouffer's Wild America". Congratulations on your win on mile 8 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 9 has already started!
Alex Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 8:17 PM
A flawlessly fluent narration of struggle and win. Congratulations!
Seeker Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 1:42 AM
So, so, powerful! A clear fave. Superb writing at the highest level, Jeff!
Kyser Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 7:56 AM
Thanks so much for your kind words!
Andresen Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 10:14 AM
- Woow ... love it, Heidi :) - Congratulations on p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kyser Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 7:56 AM
So glad you enjoyed it, thanks!
Peck Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 4:43 PM
This is so beautiful, Jeff. And how we love an underdog who begins to soar! I especially love your last two lines. Congratulations on POTD!
Kyser Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 7:23 PM
Thanks, Ann. I've been a little surprised at the response to this one.
George Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 9:38 AM
I wonder how I missed this beautiful poem. Being a little busy, I didn't look at the POTDs for about a week. The bird's final flight into the unknown and into distant shores was a leap of confidence. Though she had stayed back, circumstances finally pushed her into a brave effort. Great poem dear friend and a well deserved POTD
Kyser Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 10:20 AM
I am so glad you enjoyed it - thank you for the kind words!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 12:18 AM
OMG, Jeff. I was totally enthralled with the raw emotions felt as chills formed on my skin. Your talent is brilliantly displayed in this magnificent thrilling poem. This piece is truly worthy of POTD. I hope it garners a top award. Congratulations! A fave! Blessings xxoo
Kyser Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 3:34 AM
I’m so glad you enjoyed it, Connie, thank you for such kind words!
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July 2, 2022 at 12:32 PM
Well done Jeff and congratulations on poem of the day with this wonderful poetry. We never know what birds go through, we only admire their beauty when they fly into view… Belle
Kyser Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 3:34 AM
Thanks so much, Belle.
Nicole Avatar
July 1, 2022 at 6:00 PM
Instead of being in a rush . . . "She stays in the shadows" I think many can relate. (I know I can). Of course she remembers what her "mother had taught her". Wise and Brave ! Two amazing qualities to have. You have created a Masterpiece, Jeff. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
Kyser Avatar
July 1, 2022 at 6:24 PM
Thanks, Brandy, so glad you enjoyed it!
May Avatar
July 1, 2022 at 5:13 PM
Taking a leap of faith, Congrats on POTD
Kyser Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 3:35 AM
Thanks, Joseph!
Gorelick Avatar
July 1, 2022 at 5:08 PM
Congratulations on our POTD Jeff! Enrapt by the graceful intrigue of your soaring narrative.
Kyser Avatar
July 3, 2022 at 3:36 AM
Thanks so much, Robert!
Flood Avatar
July 1, 2022 at 5:06 PM
Eat your heart out Mr Attenborough, this is how it’s done. Brilliant Jeff. Congrats on your poem of the day. Sorry I’m late to the party. Terry
Kyser Avatar
July 1, 2022 at 6:38 PM
Ha, thanks, Terry.
Watt Avatar
July 1, 2022 at 5:00 PM
Jeff, well written tale of the one survivor. Reminded me of the osprey nest I saw high on a cliff in Yellowstone. I always enjoy the cadence of your poetry, and your ability to tell a story in poetry is so admirable. Congrats on your POTD ~ John
Kyser Avatar
July 1, 2022 at 5:27 PM
Thanks, John, I’ve watched some amazing footage of peregrine falcons, they are amazing. Less familiar with ospreys, but beautiful birds
Kitchin Avatar
July 1, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Jeff, a captivating poem, love the last stanza, congratulations on POTD!
Kyser Avatar
July 1, 2022 at 2:37 PM
Thanks, Tania!
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