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I savour sacred silent seclusion, where serendipity bird songs are still; and spiritual soundless thoughts scatter, in scarlet saffron sunsets to the stars. That shimmer and sparkle, and brightly shine, where my silenced soul sails across the sky; to find serenity and Shangri-la ! __________________ March 30, 2021 Written for the Standard contest, Savouring Solitude sponsor, JCB, Judged 04/23/2021 First Place Submitted into the Standard contest, A Strand (1068) Brian Strand, Judged 02/08/2022 First Place

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Date: 2/8/2022 7:47:00 PM
Beautiful poem Constance! I could really feel it! Congrats!
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Date: 2/9/2022 1:57:00 PM
Jim, thank you so much for the compliment and the congrats ~ Constance
Date: 2/8/2022 7:32:00 PM
"savour sacred silent seclusion" - Many beautiful 'S' words. "silenced soul sails across the sky" - Great! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/9/2022 1:58:00 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations ~ Constance
Date: 2/8/2022 2:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your double win dear Heart with this splendid piece! Stunning imagery and fine alliteration at its best.
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Date: 2/9/2022 1:59:00 PM
JCB, thank you for the congratulations, comment and compliment, blessings ~ Constance
Date: 5/28/2021 4:50:00 PM
'spiritual soundless thoughts scatter, in scarlet saffron sunsets to the stars' Brilliant imagery... Ah the soul in Shangri-la! Perfect expression for a perfect quietude.
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Date: 5/29/2021 8:46:00 AM
Harpreet, thanks for visiting my poem and for the lovely compliment and comment, peace _Constanc
Date: 3/31/2021 5:56:00 AM
Brilliant job with serene "S" words Constance. All the best.
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Date: 3/31/2021 7:48:00 AM
Vijay, thanks for the compliment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 3/30/2021 2:17:00 PM
Exquisite writing, Constance. I loved your alliteration on the "S" sounds, softly, suggesting..."Shangri-la". Looks like a sure winner to me.
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Date: 3/31/2021 7:49:00 AM
Milt, thanks for the compliment, sure hope it is a winner too _Constance
Date: 3/30/2021 1:51:00 PM
Silent sacred voyage to paradise, spiritual solitude of soul.. serenity soft signs, sound of sublime safety state of shangri la salute alkas
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Date: 3/31/2021 7:50:00 AM
Alkas, thanks for that lovely poetic comment, appreciate _Constance

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