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Solitude

calm waters be still
reflections of loneliness
remnants of winter 


For Raul's contest

introspectionnaturehaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2010 8:38:00 AM

Wnoderful Michael, your solitude haiku is the loneliness os being alone in my cold wheather. Enjoyed reading your solo winter feeling of nature, glad the season is over, but not for long. Thans for the poem and have yours self a nice one,..p.d.

James Fraser

Date: 2/28/2010 4:40:00 AM

Terrific Haiku Michael >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2010 5:32:00 PM

I really love this one. One of my favs in this particular winners circle!!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/20/2010 1:56:00 AM

Congratulations Michael, on your win in Raul Moreno’s “Morning Ambiance” contest with this very peaceful poem. Sincerely, Dane Ann

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 2/19/2010 10:30:00 AM

Congratulations on a wonderful Haiku and your win, well deserved. Caryl

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/19/2010 8:22:00 AM

A beautiful haiku....as calming as the lovely photo ....enjoyed this one! ~Congratulations on placing in the contest, Michael! ~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/19/2010 6:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest (Morning Ambiance) Michael. Love, Carol

Marty Owens

Date: 2/19/2010 6:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win...beautiful Haiku...enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/19/2010 4:33:00 AM

Congrats Michael on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win and description of the photo ... a big congrats to a wonderful poet with a gifted pen.. thankxxx so very much for your support and congrats on my recent winnings also.. much appreciated Michael.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/18/2010 9:48:00 PM

Michael, congrats in your placement in my contest...Raul

Joanna Smith

Date: 2/18/2010 12:03:00 PM

this is a nice haiku i hope it wins the contest it would be deserved with this great piece i really loved it! =)Jo

June Ellen Smith

Date: 2/17/2010 5:39:00 PM

Very nice, well written, enjoyed. Ellen

Sheila Parrish-Spence

Date: 2/16/2010 8:28:00 PM

This poem can mean many things. What comes to my mind is how some people cannot stay inside too long. Winter has too many short days and not enough light to boost the inner spirit. This is very moving.

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/16/2010 5:29:00 PM

A beautiful picture, MJ! I wish you luck in the contest! And hope you all are doing fine!! God bless. Peace, Audrey

Constance La France

Date: 2/16/2010 2:51:00 PM

it was a lonely picture, I agree, and you have described it beautifully.. and thanks for your comment on my poetry, very much appreciated... keep the pen flowing, dear heart.... Constance

Dana Jordan

Date: 2/16/2010 10:42:00 AM

sorry took so long brother. not tech savy per se!!! 5093015608 and how i cannot see your email on hotmail is beyond me. will look again and send there also if i can find it!

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/16/2010 4:13:00 AM

And still waters run deep , MJ . This has to be in the winners list ....