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Mystic Rose Rose's Contest: A Rose In The Garden Of Love Resubmitted 1Mar 2025
We drift softly together- - hands glazing a window filled with stars where row of flora bends its twirling hips and curtains lift the fabric of breath, until we become twinsouls in August's hours that bless the garden of devotion... and in the stillness of dusk when all blossoms turn to virtues deepening the fragrance of the sky, we will find each other in a cradle of one rose in the glade-- as a breeze disrobes our pores stirring the ember of fireflies blazed, that even moonglow crowns our love amidst the glimmer of jovial kisses undefined by any name, while we, in a bright pastel of August's rose, together... drift softly.

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Date: 3/4/2025 7:13:00 PM
Dear Nette, the rich imagery and emotion of your poem reveals a lush scene with soft elegant romance. Congratulations for your success in Rose’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/3/2025 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nanette! ...Fran
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Date: 3/2/2025 10:33:00 PM
refreshing write, breeze like, congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/2/2025 4:24:00 PM
You won me over with your poem Nette, congrats on your win and thank you for joining the contest :)
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Date: 11/23/2017 2:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Nette.
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Date: 11/19/2017 10:33:00 PM
Very sweet poem, Nette. Congrats.
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Date: 8/28/2016 11:44:00 AM
Nette, a beautifully penned poem dear lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest (sorry for the late comment) :)-luloo
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Date: 8/27/2016 11:21:00 PM
Congrats on your placing high. Well done with this lovely write. :) Sunita
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Date: 12/7/2015 10:27:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Nette. Lovely! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/7/2015 6:15:00 AM
Hi nette. Congrats for your well, deserved win in the Romantic Poem contest! ;-)
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Date: 12/7/2015 3:00:00 AM
Romantic win nette congratulations!!
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Date: 12/7/2015 1:31:00 AM
Congrats on contest! Beautiful!
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:18:00 PM
Wow nette a great romantic write.. Congrats on big win!~
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Date: 12/6/2015 5:22:00 PM
This is very deep and, I admit, I think over my head. I have read it many times and while I find it poetically beautiful, I am not understanding. Obviously, it holds much meaning for many people and is IN NO way a failure, I am apparently just not 'there.' Not every poem will ever have meaning for everyone and certainly not always the same meaning. Congratulations - it truly is pretty ... CayCay
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Date: 12/6/2015 5:12:00 PM
Nette, it was a beautiful and soft read **SKAT**
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Date: 12/6/2015 5:11:00 PM
Nette, <3 Congratulations on your wonderful ROMANTIC win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my romantic blog "No Barriers." Help celebrate each and every win by dropping by with a nice and sweet congratulations. You never know, you might want to pick out a few titles to read and enjoy. Pass the encouragement, every smile counts. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
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Date: 11/6/2013 9:05:00 PM
Nette, this is a pretty deep Blame It On The Moon poem.... congrats... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/2/2013 6:41:00 PM
This has your poetic stamp all over it. Congratulations on your winning entry. Joyce
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:33:00 PM
Another breath-taking beauty......my eyes just drift through each line, and become mesmerized! Lovely lovely!! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/1/2013 5:58:00 PM
love the way you crafted this...it drifts softly down the page...like a dew drop kissing a flower....beautiful poem...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/1/2013 1:09:00 PM
Great winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2013 7:31:00 AM
another beauty another in nette congratulations xx
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Date: 11/1/2013 12:18:00 AM
Such a great piece, Nette! Napakahusay! Bless you! Saludo talaga! Aja, Nette! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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Date: 10/26/2013 1:21:00 PM
This is just amazing !!!
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Date: 10/23/2013 8:28:00 AM
Wonderful write. The reader must also drift slowly through your words to not miss a single beautiful image.
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