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Art by- Richard Johnson

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in

the same

skillful way satin

serenades smooth silky skin . .

the soft touch of spring

is stimulating and seducing my senses

- the scene is serene, simple and satisfying -

 

in

the same

sweet symbolic way,

i’m longing to

savor the soft

touch of

you

 

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       - because the ache is strong -

the welcome of spring and sweet love

 

soft touch



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in
the same 
skillful way satin
serenades smooth silky skin . . 
the soft touch of spring 
is stimulating and seducing my senses 
- the scene is serene, simple and satisfying  -

in 
the same 
sweet symbolic way,
i’m longing to
savor the soft
touch of
you


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        - because the ache is strong -
the welcome of spring and sweet love
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Man Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 10:44 AM
Brandy, I see your pen (and heart) has not lost its luster. You write with beauty and grace. You evoke a rainbow of emotions.. this one is sensuous and tender. In this style, you are a Poet Master. I love the afterglow that comes over me after reading your art. Thank you dear friend!
Nicole Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 7:19 PM
Lyric Man, I wouldn't say I'm a Poet Master, just a simple woman scribbling from the heart. Soft emotions caress the page, and yes, sensuality shines through, indeed. :) Your thoughts bring a smile, my dear sweet friend. Thank you. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
George Avatar
June 2, 2024 at 12:00 PM
Your desire for the touch of a loved one flows through, emotionally. I feel those yearns and appreciation for simplicity in connection with nature and loved one. Cheers, Brandy.
Nicole Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 7:14 PM
Thank you, Tonye. Connecting in this way is simply breathtaking. It creates a beautiful mood. Always longing for closeness and a soft touch, it seems. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Nice profile pic, by the way. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Wraith Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 7:40 PM
Passionate and evocative. A longing in your words and a yearing in your soul. Emotionally moving. The beauty lies in the elegant simplicity.
Nicole Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 7:55 PM
Yes, moments within hold passion and a tender longing. You're able to embrace each emotion so deeply. I appreciate you and your kind words. My heart is smiling. Thank you, Edward. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 5:26 PM
Very sweet, Brandy!
Nicole Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 6:46 PM
So kind of you to say, Kim. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Empress Avatar
April 23, 2024 at 12:49 AM
Ah the longing that youv depicted with such seamless and soft yet elegant alliterations really is soulfully poetic! I love it! Especially “ in the same sweet symbolic way, i’m longing to savor the soft touch of you“ awwn how beautiful! And how romantic it is! Very evocative poem! In few words youv delivered one that would touch any heart! Pleasure reading you dear brandy! Keep shining always
Nicole Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 5:40 PM
Dear Ink, you always feel every moment and emotion within. You're such a talented poetess, and I'm in complete awe with all your kind words and compliments about me and my poetry. Moments within do hold beauty, love, longing and romance. Soft sensuality. Thank you for your wonderful comment, my dear sweet friend. Keep shining your light for all to see. :) Hugs, Brandy
Rose  Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 6:54 PM
I love the purple imaginings your words are both soft but strong, perfect poem, thanks for sharing.
Nicole Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 5:29 PM
I think purple adds to the poem. :) So kind of you to mention it, Vienna. Your lovely comment brings a smile to my heart. Thank you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Rolland Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 5:22 AM
delicate poem, with sensuality of words, alliterations are successful, thanks poet
Nicole Avatar
April 18, 2024 at 7:53 AM
Thank you Yann, for your lovely comment. Your kind words bring a smile. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
Delaney Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 4:03 PM
Love the sensual write, Brandy: Alliteration is used skillfully here without any overpowering of the real meaning of the poem/ SuZ
Nicole Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 6:44 PM
Dear Suzanne, even though moments of Spring and a tender longing are tucked within, a soft touch of sensuality seems to curl around each word. Your comment is beautiful. Thank you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2024 at 7:22 PM
So soft and lovely. Awesome picture too
Nicole Avatar
April 16, 2024 at 6:31 PM
Thank you Andrea, for your lovely comment. I appreciate you mentioning the photo. I think paintings by ' Richard Johnson ' are so beautiful. ' My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Manassian Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 9:06 PM
What a delightful piece. Such beautiful use of alteration. Smooth and silky... filled with longing and love. Great work! Thanks for your visit.
Nicole Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 7:26 PM
Thank you, Eileen. Alterations seem to have captured my muse lately. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. You're very welcome for the visit to your page. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Callus Avatar
April 11, 2024 at 7:03 AM
The sweet touches of silk on skin, spring, and love have the ability to seduce, stimulate and satisfy....imagine when all 3 occur simultaneously! May sweet love visit you and make your life complete, dear Brandy! ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul
Nicole Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 6:29 PM
Yes, silk and soft moments of Spring certainly have a way of stimulating the senses. Love is a whisper away, and I feel its sweet touch. Thank you Paul, for your lovely comment. My best to you, my dear sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Severo Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 1:08 AM
beautiful, xoxo
Nicole Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 8:07 AM
Thank you, Aurore. Your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Buhagiar Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 2:29 AM
Beautiful alliteration in your romantic way.
Nicole Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 8:01 AM
So kind of you to say, Victor. Your thoughts bring a smile. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
DiMino Avatar
April 7, 2024 at 3:25 AM
Indeed, spring is alive with renewal. Lovely words.
Nicole Avatar
April 9, 2024 at 7:57 AM
Such a beautiful time. Thank you Joe, for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Bell Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 4:46 AM
Spring is in the air, fifty layers of clothes come off, and the body comes alive and reawakens.
Nicole Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 5:33 PM
In moments of Spring, the wind has a cool touch. :) Layers of clothing disappear, when temps are warmer. Your thoughts bring a smile, Paul. Many wonderful blessing to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Kendrick Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 6:40 AM
Ahh!! Very romantic and poetic plus a little adult. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara K
Nicole Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 7:09 PM
Thank you, Sara. Moments within are soft and romantic. I suppose the thought of ' satin stimulating ' and ' seducing my senses, ' is what makes it more adult. I'm longing to know love and its sweet touch. Your kind words are appreciated. You're very welcome, my dear friend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Baker Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 7:25 PM
Lovely sensual poem, Brandy. Spring can get a person in the mood for love. The Alliteration was the perfect form of poetry for this one. Your presentation was delightful. Thanks for sharing your fine poetry with us, my sweet friend. Bill Have a nice Easter weekend. Bill
Nicole Avatar
March 31, 2024 at 4:58 PM
Bill, while there's a soft sensual side to this scribble, a deep longing to feel sweet love surrounds the heart even more. Spring creates a beautiful mood, indeed. I appreciate you noticing the alliteration within. Thank you for saying it fits this form and that my presentation is delightful. Always a joy to read your kind words. May you have a wonderful evening. :) Hugs, Brandy
Scott Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 5:59 PM
Ooh. S is a great selection for sensual soliloquy. Just a delightful delivery, Brandy. Blessings. Sx
Nicole Avatar
March 30, 2024 at 6:33 PM
So true, Sam. There's sensual softness within and the sweet sound of the letter S, is soothing; along with satisfying. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy
Hind Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 6:53 PM
Gorgeous, it flowed in such a classy way- you're quite a poetess :)
Nicole Avatar
March 29, 2024 at 5:42 PM
Thank you for the compliment, Paige. Your kindness doesn't go unnoticed. I'm just a simple woman that likes to scribble in soft tones. Your thoughts leave me in awe. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Gorelick Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 6:37 PM
Marvelous! Spring is nature's way of beckoning: Behold, I have returned, welcoming, and as vibrantly sensuous as ever, my friend. Love it! Robert
Nicole Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 7:57 PM
So many magical moments, indeed. Spring sweetly smiles and then serenades in a sensual way. Simply longing to feel love and its soft touch. Thank you Robert, for your lovely comment. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Daniel Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 2:18 AM
Such tender words, Brandy, brilliant in their simple display of emotions:)
Nicole Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 7:33 PM
Dear Joanna, your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. Spring is in the air, and so is the soft touch of love. Many wonderful blessings to you, my sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
May Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 6:36 AM
Spring serenades the heart with petals of love, Wonderful write Brandy, hugs
Nicole Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 7:50 PM
Such a sweet thing to say. Thank you Joseph, for your lovely comment. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Parker Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 10:40 PM
Symbolic serenades arouse your lover. Sensuous delights anticipated. XXX territory or blesséd amorè... :o/
Nicole Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 7:23 PM
Longing and a deep connection lingers within. ' in the same symbolic way,' satin serenades the skin and spring seduces the senses.' There's a sweet ache, to know that soft touch of love. Thank you, Arlo. Your thoughts are appreciated. :)
Dome Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 5:28 PM
What a wonderful piece of art. well constructed with such beauty. From the heart. A favourite. Well done exceptionally Gifted dreamy and Queen of the Quill. Love it, Pete. Inspired.
Nicole Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 7:26 PM
I'm smiling and blushing with you saying ' I'm Queen of the Quill. ' Such a wonderful compliment. :) Thank you, Peter. My words are always from the heart. A tender longing lingers within, while being romantic and dreamy at the same time. Thank you for your lovely comment and for saving this to your favorites. My best to you. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
March 18, 2024 at 2:22 AM
This is absolutely beautiful, Brandy. Spring is the symbolic awakening of nature surrounding us, and likewise, the awakening of the sensual nature of our emotions. It is the symbol of hope and anticipation for what lies ahead. Warm Spring hugs, John
Nicole Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 7:13 PM
Seems to be the right time to place these words upon the page, with nature in full bloom and love being in the air. Spring is a beautiful season, indeed. There's so many moments to embrace. Your thoughts are sweet and poetic, my dear friend. Thank you for being so kind. My best to you, John. Sending Spring hugs your way. :) Brandy
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