Soft, Fluffy Ducks

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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Cozy soft little sleepy ducklings Cuddling up to their warm mother Dreaming of the waterfalls in spring Sitting within mists of rainbows that shimmer Gliding down splashing into aquamarine Swirling like fine Olympic ice skaters Riding swiftly chasing seeds along golden serene Speaking playfully as magical Sunset still lingers Caressing her feathers, so soft and warm Being kissed lovingly, springtime's embrace Romantic sunlight beams through clouds of a storm Illuminating every fuzzy, soft cute cuddly face

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/3/2024 6:28:00 AM

A delightful photo and a delightful poem, Sara. You captured the joy of spring --as they preen with exuberance.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 5:44:00 PM

thanks for visiting, Vijay. You're right--they do preen with exuberance. I appreciate your thoughts. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/2/2024 8:25:00 PM

Your lovely poem makes me wish I were a duck. ~ Gershon Gander-Goose

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 4:28:00 AM

dear Gershon Gander Goose--thanks for your visit and for your witty words. You 'quacked me up' with your words :-) Have a splendid day, Sara

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/2/2024 8:21:00 PM

Warm and fuzzy, Sara. Your thoughts took me away with joyful imagery. Who doesn't love cuddling chics, so cute! Hugs!Anaya

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 4:27:00 AM

thanks for your visit and enthusiastic comments. I agree...cuddly chics are adorable and irresistible. hugs for your day, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/2/2024 7:10:00 PM

Your poem explores the enchanting and pure essence of nature, with a special emphasis on the delicate bond between ducklings and their mother, dear Sara. It delves into the reverie of the natural wonders and the blissful embrace of springtime. The poem gracefully employs tender and soothing language, employing words such as "snug," "gentle," "nestling," "daydreaming," "gliding," and "caressing" to cultivate a serene ambiance.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 4:26:00 AM

dearest Sotto-I find your comments encouraging for you explore the layers and inner workings of my poem(s) Grateful your found my language tender and soothing...words that describe how I feel when watching baby ducklings. Yes, I'm enamored with them :-) Enjoy your day, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 4/2/2024 7:06:00 PM

A cute poem my friend. I love watching them cross the yard. All lined up in a row.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/3/2024 4:24:00 AM

thanks, Jerry. I'm like you...love watching them. I'm enamored with them this time of year. Have a pleasant day. Sara