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So Simple a Star

so simple a star, for oh so long it glitters, in my eyes — still alive. living things have walked this path in love, excited, lonely and ragged. do stars fall like rain or snow? do they stop the cuckoo clock? the sky — like the sea manifest, a prayer to touch. pondering the last star — is it the same as the first? is it close to my heart or far? is it perhaps Rilke’s white city?* perhaps...perhaps 12/17/2018 *Lament by Rainer Maria Rilke

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Date: 12/18/2018 10:34:00 AM
Lord God! This has excited me to my soul... My spirit dances like a redeemed bastard with your lines... Keep on writing dear friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2018 1:16:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed, my friend!
Date: 12/18/2018 10:25:00 AM
My great aunt had a cuckoo clock; I don't think it ever stopped...I used to love watching it and waiting to see that cuckoo pop out and chirp. There were times when her canary shouted it down with one of its songs. Thanks for the good memory.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2018 1:15:00 PM
My Grandma had one. Loved to hear it. We bought one in Germany though don’t always keep it on because it plays music too! Grandkids love it!
Date: 12/17/2018 5:50:00 PM
So simple, and yet, as you read this wonderful tribute, you have to realize Kim that you are showing us the facets of a star that are anything but simple.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2018 7:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren!
Date: 12/17/2018 3:49:00 PM
Kim, beautiful !!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/17/2018 7:56:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Constance!

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